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Niki, ET Challenge
by Ed J. → (All Poetry by Ed J.)
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Niki was the best dog I ever had and she does rest on my headboard.
Like an idiot, I took the challenge.


One theme using  different styles


 

Senryu-5-7-5
Cinquain-2-4-6-8-2
Tanka -5-7-5-7-7
Englyn-7 syllable- triplet rhyme
Finish with  Senryu-


 

My love and my guard
 

protect your wards and your yard
 

four years our regards
 

...continued...

Copyrighted Ed J 2008
 
 
 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Niki, ET Challenge"
Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on July 28, 2008
Beyond touching. Heartrending too weak!! All that keeps one from dissolving in tears is awe over the way you have expressed the inexpressible. Age has robbed one of our beloved dogs of mobility and continence, but she is not in pain and still has a good appetite, and I love to baby her, bless her heart. Thank you for showing me the way to this. . .I have run out of words {me!!}, I fear. May good memories ease your pain. . in time. Love, Phyllis

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on January 21, 2008
Very heartwarming piece filled with so much love and understanding. Always so difficult when one suffers such a loss.....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on January 20, 2008
Ed, this is so touching. Only those of us with pets and who have suffered their loss can fully understand.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 20, 2008
not bad ... enjoyed reading ...

btw, the International Society of Poets is a scam ...

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on January 20, 2008
a very deep and soulful write-so well done-it hit home as my sister is in the battle of her life against lukemia

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on January 20, 2008
awww hits home,, it is not easy ! As far as the challenge you stepped up to the plate and hit a home run, Great Job
Christine

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on January 20, 2008
I am a 100% dog lover . . . This hurt me to read . . . I have one who will be gone, I hope not soon, but he is a small dog and he is fourteen years old . . . Touching write . . .

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on January 20, 2008
A difficult journey that many of us face. It made me cry, but ... been there, done that. You write about this difficult time with a caring and sensitive heart. Me thinks - you know ...

I don't think that anything that is honest can be morbid, only different. You did an awesome job taking up Eileen's challenge.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 18, 2008
Ed thank you for doing the challenge, this is sad,but so beautifully done.Far from being an idiot,you outdid me!;-) Sorry about Niki, I know the feeling....You should put ETchallenge in your title, it might get more reads.

ET

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
Reviewed on January 18, 2008
Ed, this is so nicely done, but it must have been painful, too.
Lovely,
Becca~


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