the kiss she blew my way
drifted and silently merged
into the compassionate currents
of an angel's breath
tenderly embracing my cheek
and gently caressing my soul
would that I could forever hold
in abeyance the wonder of the moment
my mind went 'round in carousel circles
the missteps of my heart's rhythm
thump thumping an alert
for tender romance come my way
late on that day as March waned
Spring dare not have it
any other way
blossoms were caressing the trees
jealous robins sought parody
owls, sages of the darkness
hooted their jealous messages
for it was I that had received
the kiss, she blew my way
She took your heart too, as I feel in this romantic expressive poem!
Such eloquent stunning beauty you delicately had a way of writing it!
The Kiss She blew my way, as this poem blows me away! The way you added the robins, and owls (sages of darkness and knowing through their spiritual messages) behooves me, I found it thrilling!
Write On!
Warmest Blessings of Love and Peace, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExooo
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on March 30, 2009
Oh my,breath taking sweet Jon..wowwwwwww I just love this..stay safe and well dear friend...Hugssssss and kisses coming your way...sighhhh
The kiss she blew your way is as soft and gentle as the spring around you that is awakening, adding to the ambience of the moment...
splendid writing Jon Michael
much love and peace dear friend, Carole~
I can see from this beautiful poem that spring is in the air and in your heart, and that you have an early start, Blessings may it blossom like the trees, your new found love! Jasmin Horst
Jon,
Joy and tenderness and the excitement of love run all the way through, and at half way you raise it to another level, Nature's jealousy..."owls, sages of the darkness hooted their jealous messages" (wonderful!) of your success and being the chosen one. Not only were you blown away, we are.
John
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Sheila
Exceptional write..
Vesna
Such eloquent stunning beauty you delicately had a way of writing it!
The Kiss She blew my way, as this poem blows me away! The way you added the robins, and owls (sages of darkness and knowing through their spiritual messages) behooves me, I found it thrilling!
Write On!
Warmest Blessings of Love and Peace, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExooo
Edwin
jealous robins sought parody
owls, sages of the darkness
hooted their jealous messages
for it was I that had received
the kiss, she blew my way
- David
Regis
splendid writing Jon Michael
much love and peace dear friend, Carole~
wonderful moments, A rare beauty!...
by the wonder of the moment. -gene.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Such description!
Sandie Angel :o)
Joy and tenderness and the excitement of love run all the way through, and at half way you raise it to another level, Nature's jealousy..."owls, sages of the darkness hooted their jealous messages" (wonderful!) of your success and being the chosen one. Not only were you blown away, we are.
John
Ron