Beautifully written, Jon! Love all the descriptive words you have penned in this...thank you for taking us on this adventure of love (albeit surreptitiously :o)
Blessings and Love - Micke
The beauty of the setting only enhances the romance being played out in this night made for lovers...soft and gently sensual, Jon Michael
love and peace to you, Carole~
Jon,
You haven't missed a beat, it's so good to see you back posting. All of us will love this passionate, romantic poem with its eloquent and intimate expression, and I know Gene is honoured. A beauty here.
John
Jon, your return on the "roll of advancing tide and crashing waves"
would be happiness enough, but I'm overwhelmed and honored by the preface to your impassioned Beach Affair. In the rush I feel in the staccato effect of the short lines of your poem I sense the crashing of the waves and the imprint of love-making on the sand...
rustling dune grass
gossips our deeds
to the eavesdropping
sandpipers and crabs
Welcome back, my friend. You return in great style. -gene.
and thank you for taking me there Jon!
"Beach Affair" is a beautiful dance & an endearing embrace....
Embraced~Embrassé
Vickie
(psst....Glad Your Back!)
Jon, are you sure you aren't plagerizing one of the love poems written to his mistress in Argentina by the S.C Governor?
Steamy write that made me thing about current events.......lol
If you tend to believe romantic, passionate, masculine poetry is a thing of past eras, read "She Intrigues Me," and be swept away in the beautiful craft of a contemporary poet of love.
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Blessings and Love - Micke
Ron
Regis
best wishes
neerja
<3 Phyllis <3
EDWIN
love and peace to you, Carole~
Sheila
You haven't missed a beat, it's so good to see you back posting. All of us will love this passionate, romantic poem with its eloquent and intimate expression, and I know Gene is honoured. A beauty here.
John
Marcia
Fee
would be happiness enough, but I'm overwhelmed and honored by the preface to your impassioned Beach Affair. In the rush I feel in the staccato effect of the short lines of your poem I sense the crashing of the waves and the imprint of love-making on the sand...
rustling dune grass
gossips our deeds
to the eavesdropping
sandpipers and crabs
Welcome back, my friend. You return in great style. -gene.
Cheers,
Dan
Where have you been? I've missed you! Glad you haven't lost your touch - this is beautiful. Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
like I love the ocean,they go together so beautifully;-)
Eileen
Blessings,
Christine
"Beach Affair" is a beautiful dance & an endearing embrace....
Embraced~Embrassé
Vickie
(psst....Glad Your Back!)
Steamy write that made me thing about current events.......lol
Walt
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. ;D