voyage of redemption (poem) by Jon Michael Willey on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on November 10, 2011

OUtstanding piece...powerful!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on November 7, 2011

I'm still reading you my friend; though my present labor prohibits frequent visits... with each visit, I am overwhelmed by your talent... I so enjoyed the way you metaphorically expressed this journey by means of sailing to get to a place called redemption! Blessings! Janice Beaty Springs

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on November 2, 2011

Simple words with a powerful undercurrent that smacks of truth. Penetrating. --charlie

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo

Reviewed on November 1, 2011

There are so many thoughts 'attacking' my brain as read and re-read this incredible poem. It is JUST the right poem at JUST the right time for me. God always points me in the direction that I need to go and when I need to be there. I have been away from the Den for way tooooo long. Your poem is exactly what I need. Tak care and God bless you, my friend.

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on October 31, 2011

captivating haunt of a write, jon.
resonates at a sub-atomic level.
moon shade and the quest for revival--very ancient & penetrating stuff.
love it!
peace & blessings,
carolyn

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson

Reviewed on October 30, 2011

A "living" journey
worthy to let sail!!
~Jon~
You Present so vivid!!!

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Axilea MU

Reviewed on October 30, 2011

A true poetic gem with a soulful metaphor. It begins with great energy in that bridging of "disappointment and lament"... then, there is this feeling of meditation and introspection, a quiet moment to be in touch with oneself. Redemption, a strong word, both meaningful and mysterious. Thank you for sharing Jon.

Axilea

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on October 27, 2011

WE ARE ALL SAILORS ON THIS SEA OF LIFE AND...YES...SOMEWHERE ALONG THE 'JOURNEY' ONE 'MUST' SEEK...REDEMPTION. FOR, THAT'S WHAT THE 'VOYAGE' IS ALL ABOUT IN THE FIRST PLACE. A FANTASTIC WORK! THANKS FOR SHARING THIS KEEPER. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 26, 2011

Thank you for sharing this meaningful metaphorical offering, Jon. I am certain that many can relate to the theme that you are sharing through your verses here. Love and peace to you, my friend.

Regis

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on October 26, 2011

A deep inner look at a soul searching for that path to redemption...beautiful and touching piece, Jon Michael...
love and peace dear friend, Carole~

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 26, 2011

Splendid metaphor and poetry,Jon! you are a deep thinker,and it shows in your great work!Good to read you again!;-)

luv,
et

Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat

Reviewed on October 25, 2011

Jon Michael,

Combining redemption with sailing. Very clever. This was a wonderful write.

Mary

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 24, 2011

a voyage of redemption is a journey into the soul ...

excellent introspective allegorical work ...

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on October 24, 2011

Beautiful honest soul searching plea, prayers are answered..love the line..."my soul searching for accord�redemption"
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by pat medlin

Reviewed on October 24, 2011

nice

Reviewed by Andy Turner

Reviewed on October 24, 2011

A most powerful allegory as one circumnavigates the forever changing seas of life.

I guess in Dover, Kent, they've literally done this, by digging a tunnel under the sea.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on October 24, 2011

Well done my friend...after just doing a collab with Christine Alwin along a nautical theme (Adrift/Anchor) this one is easy to relate to.
fee

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on October 23, 2011

Expertly articulated poem reflecting feelings and emotions of deep human concern. Loved this very much, jon.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on October 23, 2011

Great allegory for the stormy waters of life.

Ron

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on October 23, 2011

What a deeply profound and personal journey into which you have allowed us to glimpse this sailor's soul!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on October 23, 2011

For me, there's the suggestion of escape,
escape from what's unworthy and worthless,
escape to something morally valuable
and to a wished-for harmony where the soul
is at peace.
This reaches me within, Jon, My Friend;
i feel its prayer.

John

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on October 23, 2011

The mood and atmosphere of this poem seeps into my very bones, Jon. I feel I can know this soul intimately from only this briefest of cameos that you present because it is a state, a condition of being that perhaps prevails throughout navigating the waters of life that we are constantly cast upon. It also speaks to me of the constant "closeness" of the attitude of prayer, conscious or unconscious which, irrespective of calm or stormy waters, is perhaps an underpinning posture that keeps us questing and seeking answers to the drift of a journey we have no choice but to engage in. Powerful work and strong capture. Plumb deep and find peace! xx

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on October 23, 2011

WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! ...'I've bridged disappointment and lament the points separated by the narrows'...'to kneel and pray 'neath moon shade my soul rearching for accord...redemption'------- I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva