You Are to Blame! (poem) by Bonnie Lou May on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 18, 2008

there is such a loving tribute in your last two lines Bonnie -- well said dear lady -- peace to you -- JMW

Reviewed on October 14, 2008

very nice--and so much truth

Reviewed on October 13, 2008

YOu are a word wonder... I just don't know where all the words come from??? The subjects you write about are endless as well... great talent... lindalaw

Reviewed by Tony Jenkins

Reviewed on October 13, 2008

Nothing like a bit of time thrown in to heal the love pain.

Thank you Tony

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on October 13, 2008

I enjoyed the way you reflected on your failed love not as a negative but as a positive for leading you to a newer and better man to love and hold as your own. Well done.
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 13, 2008

powerful writing, Bonnie; hope you are okay! You are in my prayers!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on October 13, 2008

One door closes and another opens to reveal a new day.

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on October 13, 2008

You know,I've never been in a relationship before in my life,but I can honestly say that I can somehow relate to this poem.I used to like this woman and to make a long story short,she not only went back to her jealous boyfriend,but on her birthday she decided to end our friendship.That happenend 4 years ago.To be honest with you,it was a blessing in the sky because I don't need people like that to be a part of my life and want to take my kindness for granted.

Sometimes when someone hurt your feelings in a relationship,it can be a blessing in the sky because pain can bring hope for a new tomorrow and find love when you least expected it.I'm glad that you found someone special that can heal your wounds and put a blanket over your heart so that it can be filled with warmth and love.Take good care of yourself Bonnie.

Love and Hugs
Edwin

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on October 13, 2008

has an ex-sniper i will say that the hole was made by a mean 50mm from about 200 yards, a little longer away and there would have been only a hole; the gal with that hole could retribute with a 400 yeards that will take off the dark heart of the SOB!

Georg

Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat

Reviewed on October 13, 2008

Bonnie,

I could feel your pain. But sometimes it takes pain before we actually find joy. I'm glad you did.

Mary

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on October 13, 2008

Beautiful writing sweet lady,yes and true LOVE certainly will heal....stay safe and always well...Hugsssss,much love too you

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 13, 2008

Love the last two lines; true love can definitely heal.

And I'm very glad this poem wasn't about that Jersey Devil. When I saw that picture, I immediately thought of Alien!

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on October 13, 2008

Oh dear Bonnie!!! What is wrong??? Don't die please!!! Sometimes we have soft hearts and so easily let another hurt us. I'm glad you're mended at the end.

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on October 13, 2008

Hearts do heal, real love does help. Beautiful poem Bonnie.