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An Old Skate Key
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We all have wonderful stories about our Dads...her is one of mine...


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An Old Skate Key

 

Today as I was exploring an old stored box belonging to my dad.

Teardrops overflowed my eyes, my heart ached and I was really sad.

There it was just lying there in the bottom of all his aged treasures.

An old skate key that he kept safe for me by all his tender measures.

 

Every time I’d lose a key, I felt sad and totally dismayed.

But dad would wipe my tears away and a new key he gave.

For years I believed he was a Houdini for he always had a spare.

So if I ever lost one, I’d go to my dad for one no matter where.

 

Oh sure, he’d lecture me on my carelessness but gave me a new key.

Where in the world were they coming from was I there destiny?

Then one day Daddy told me, “Be very careful for this one is the last.”

He handed me the precious key and my protectiveness was cast.

 

I never lost that precious key; I kept it around my neck each day.

And that key always stayed with me when I went out to play.

It still lay within my jewelry box, protected after all these years.

So no wonder this wonderful memory made my eyes fill with tears.

 

So my clever Dad did have one left, and here it was on bottom of his treasures.

He wanted me to appreciate things, but what I learned cannot be measured.

 

Written by,

Bonnie May


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 Reviews of "An Old Skate Key"
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on February 21, 2009
this is a wonderful story regarding object lessons Bonnie -- it also brought back memories of my skating days and an old Melanie song, "I got a brand new pair of roller skates, you gotta brand new key -- I think that we should get together and try them out you see"
-- much peace and love to you -- JMW

Reviewed on February 4, 2009
Bonnie~!

This touched me deeply - my mom has been giving me a few of my dad's things . . . beautiful. Thank you so much for this tender poem!!


LOve and Hugs,

Lance

Reviewed by Linda Law
Reviewed on February 4, 2009
You are so blessed to have such loving and beautiful memories of your father! I never owned a pair of skates...never skated...never did anything when I was young...and now that I am old I try to do things everyday I can...because I missed so much...a whole childhood I know of... guess that's why I'm such a giggling girlie girl .... I love your stories so much... hugs, lindalaw

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on February 4, 2009
Thanks for the memory...I have a scar because I skated without tightening the skates! I had lost my key. Precious memory you have shared

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on February 4, 2009
Beautiful tribute to your dad...
Cryssa

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on February 4, 2009
I'm glad Georg explained what a skate key did, as that was my next question...we used skateboards & bicycles to get around at the shore...maybe it was a girl thing, skates...e


Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on February 4, 2009
Oh! that key, the roller-skaters which one could enlarge as our feet became bigger, although, we didn't have helmets, elbows and knee's padding...and those skates weighed a ton!
Thanks for the memories.

Georg


Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 4, 2009
A true treasure of a poem, Bonnie. I also keep and treasure many things my Dad gave me, and I always will.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on February 4, 2009
VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed on February 4, 2009
Heartwarmingly beautiful piece, Bonnie; you sure know how to grab the reader's heart and hold on to it tightly! Very well penned, brava, dear lady!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on February 4, 2009
Once again you warm heart and soul with such a beautiful story of fathers and their love. As a father and a grandfather our roles often differ from those of women, we are often forced to find ways to impart knowledge and rules to safeguard our children in more conventional ways. At times with firmness, lecture, dissappointing looks etc but always in such a way that our children never doubt for a second that we love them.

hugs
fee

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on February 4, 2009
You had a very wise and loving dad and you learned the lesson he wanted you to know. We have to take the responsibility for what we are given.

Reviewed on February 4, 2009
The memories carry us through don't they? I have some beautiful memories from Nonna, I loved these lines, thank you for sharing
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on February 3, 2009
It's a funny-looking key. This reminds me of some of the old coins in funny shapes from ancient China that I have bought in ebay.

I woudn't mind having one of this for collection purposes. I think it's extraordinary!!! Oh, perhaps there's lots of them around but I haven't seen one yet. Do you think I can still get one like this?? - I think I'm beginning to sound dumb! Where can I find one like this?

Sandie Angel :o)


Reviewed on February 3, 2009
Wonderful lesson in these lines, Bonnie, well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on February 3, 2009
A beautiful and heart warming write Bonnie
You may not believe this but I still have one too
I sprayed a enamel black placed a leather strip
through the handle hole and wear it around my neck
whenever I want to feel "KOOL", specially when people ask me,
what is that around my neck?....
I respond, "Don't you know" and they really don't
Peace & love be with you

William

Reviewed on February 3, 2009
Your Dad sounds like a treasure that every little girl or boy should have. Your poem really brought back memories Bonnie. Skipping over cracks in the sidewalk, running home crying with skinned knees and palms, and that skate key on a grosgrain ribbon around my neck. Thank you for the trip down memory lane. I can smell the iodine my Mom would liberally spread on my boo boos.


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