Tracey,
Very visual. I swear I could hear the 4:00 o'clock coming through.
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on July 21, 2004
Tracey this is very good poetry. I appreciated every descriptive line you used to create the excitement as it danced across the page. Excellent job and great imagery, I could hear the train rolling by. Outstanding, Poet.
Inspirational poetry, written from the heart and soul. Verses that are well-suited for reading on a rainy day and that are guaranteed to bring a smile to your face.
A well-penned piece overflowing with superb imagery - enjoyed!
Robert
I can see the changes in style in your writing
So where did you Train for this?
Sometimes in life we just watch things pass by
but as time passes we learn to either follow the tracks or stay away from them
But why the hell does the cabose
have to grow with the passing of time
These words of wisdom have been brought to you by
Amtrack and law enforcement
Very visual. I swear I could hear the 4:00 o'clock coming through.
Love Tinka