Tracey,
I am in agreement with everyone, relationships with the wrong one can cause so much damage. It is a domino effect, but if we really want, we can pick the "important" domino back up again! :o)
Maria
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on October 10, 2002
Enjoyed this Tracey, emotional but so soft in its delivery.
Reviewed by No Longer Member (Reader)
Reviewed on October 10, 2002
OK, who's the prick?
Reviewed by Drkman (Reader)
Reviewed on October 10, 2002
Tracey,
Very nice write here. Deciet is a wicked tool that shreds the fabric of trust.
Drkman
Reviewed by Madame X (Reader)
Reviewed on October 10, 2002
Tracey-moving poem. The picture is stark and adds to this piece..breath-cutting.
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on October 10, 2002
Tracey,
Excellent write of pain and
broken relationships.
Peg
Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)
Reviewed on October 10, 2002
The lies of others can be prickley little bast.... i guess that is where they get there name from
Perhaps "..Quiet Storm" will help rekindle old flames buried and long forgotten or express the love so deeply locked inside of your soul longing to be released.
Regardless of where you may be found in love this beautiful masterpiece can be
This book represents a thirty-day period of my poetry journal. Each poem addresses
the dominant thoughts occupying my mind during the early morning hours of a given
day.
“The woman or man who is a poet, or fiction writer, or playwright, or all of these, is engaged constantly in a jazz ballet of vocabularies, passions, genders, histories, perspectives, death, love, and life. The music of revelation announces itself to
kinda like dreams up in smoke
man wish i could think like you
josie
I am in agreement with everyone, relationships with the wrong one can cause so much damage. It is a domino effect, but if we really want, we can pick the "important" domino back up again! :o)
Maria
Very nice write here. Deciet is a wicked tool that shreds the fabric of trust.
Drkman
Excellent write of pain and
broken relationships.
Peg