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What They'll Never See
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A greasy face was all they'd see


While judging all he'd ever be


But…that never brought him down.


 


Busted knuckles and sunburned skin…


Society calling his very birth a sin…


They just never wanted his kind around.


 


Setting up his workshop 100 yards wide


And dotting every mall and countryside


…he knew his job and calling well.


 


He had a heart made of the purest gold


Though the rumors…that’s not was told


Because they considered him a fiend from Hell.


 


Twenty hour days, seven days a week…


Not much time for life nor sleep…


Ah – but he'd never fuss nor complain.


 


Working beneath that murderous sun


Working when all others are home and done


And standing in wind, hail, cold and rain.


 


He had muscles from the grueling work


And sometimes his own soul would hurt


But…that never brought him down.


 


A simple carnie guy…you'd never look twice


At the attractive man beneath the lights


Of the carnival in such a judgmental town.


 


©March 26, 2005 Lori S. Maynard


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 Reviews of "What They'll Never See"
Reviewed by Henry Stevens
Reviewed on March 27, 2005
Lori, Good poem and your web page is a winner too. Keep writing. Henry

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on March 27, 2005
Hey Rube, yourself! Good poem. Little people wioth little minds, yes. In their defense, however, I have to say that not a few of carnie's are . . . unsavory to say the least. I know. I know. don't judge the all the apples just because of one rotten one. Still, the nature of their work attracts people who need to stay moving from town to town. You write this very well and I am not "on you case," just a few thoughts.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 27, 2005
This is a fitting tribute to men and women of the carnie who throughout the generations have brought entertianment, laughter and wonderful memories to kids of all ages. Great subjest, great capture and a great poem.

Happy Easter.
Felix

Reviewed by Mary Quire
Reviewed on March 27, 2005
Very nicely done. This work holds the reader's interest to the very end.

M.Rose

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 26, 2005
reflective jugement on your part ... well done!

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on March 26, 2005
thought provoking read

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on March 26, 2005
Very very well said. Here it is Easter already....


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