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4 a.m.
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This poem was published in my book "Poetry Carnival" ©2004, Lori S. Maynard


4 a.m.


I still remember that dawn's first kiss
tingling for hours a bittersweet bliss.
Knowing it ended as shadows did form.
Darkness stretched light - hearts now torn.


Talking for hours till the peak of four a.m.
confessing our pains that festered within.
Looking up at the stars, sharing life's encountners
words transcending conversation's sweet rapture.


Innocent enough, we said our hellos
after closing, one night, the traveling show.
We each had to travel roads of gravel and dirt.
Summer stretched and yawned a terrible hurt.


We never evolved from that dawn's kiss.
I used to wonder of the twilights we did miss.
But, the morning has faded and night's destroyed dawn.
Shadows erupted and the memory's nearly gone.


©2004, Lori S. Maynard "The Carnival Poet"


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 Reviews of "4 a.m."
Reviewed on August 19, 2005
You had that moment- that is Specail Lori--Great Poem- WArmly,Sheee

Reviewed on July 23, 2005
Oh how deeply poignant, beautifully written Lori,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on July 19, 2005
Nice to read you again, Lori. Sweet right, albeit sad; but that's life I suppose. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 16, 2005
love is so powerful it's memory never really fades but losing it's touch through time can sadden our hearts ...

Reviewed on July 16, 2005
Lori,

Welcome back. I've missed you--

A powerfully penned write--very melancholy!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(

Reviewed by M. B. (Reader)
Reviewed on July 16, 2005
4AM exudes a profound melancholy, Lori. The cadence and flow are exceptional.

Been a while since I've heard from you, hope life is embracing you.

~Mari

Reviewed on July 16, 2005
excellent! :)

Reviewed by Monette Bebow-Reinhard (Reader)
Reviewed on July 15, 2005
Fascinating - the capture of that first night of love's eternity. Even when the physical fades, the memory never does.

Reviewed on July 15, 2005
Interesting story. Something a little different. I like this.

Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on July 15, 2005
Now This Is More Like That ROMANTIC You...

TRASK

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on July 15, 2005
Love the irony in this write.


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