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Carnival Silence
by Lori S. Maynard → (All Poetry by Lori S. Maynard)
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This was a 9 minute free write while at the carnival that I used to travel with. It turned cold and rained for the entire week and we could not open.

Listen to the pounding of the tumbling rains
cascading over cold metal and dark lights.
I wonder how empty the world would be
if it never stopped raining tonight.

The carnival is silenced and standing still.
Great stallions pause and hold their breath.
The generator's muted and the music's gone:
and empty grave of merriment's death.

Rain is pooling on the bumper cars,
the flags are whipping around cold and wet.
The wind will not ease up and tow the sun -
Her golden job, I think she did forget.

The carnival is silenced in this rain
that controls our actions below.
Listen to the pounding of the tumbling rains
bringing silence to the traveling shows

İMay 10, 2006 Lori S. Maynard
3:51 p.m. - 4:00 p.m.
Written on my birthday on the carnival midway  

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 Reviews of "Carnival Silence"
Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
Reviewed on May 23, 2006
Excellent poem. Brings me to that place because I have spent time on the midway. Not as an employee, though. But because rain is another favorite image of mine, I felt really close to this piece.

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on May 14, 2006
Lori
I've never yet been at a carnival were you didn't get ripped off by the exorbitant prices...
Memory filled write...
Good to see you posting again...
Hope and pray that you are well and happy !
Blessings
Peter


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