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The Mark
by Lori S. Maynard → (All Poetry by Lori S. Maynard)
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Have you ever felt watched
when your ship never came in?
Have you ever felt cheated
when life handed you a win?

Have you ever felt discouraged
and a little bit off track?
I feel as though when I entered life,
the devil placed a mark upon my back.

And it signals to everyone
that my soul's too kind
and I'll never see it coming
while I let you rob me blind.

It tells the world around me
that I'm just a simple fool.
I didn't know I'd wore that mark.
So much for the Golden Rule.

It just seems the world's a midway
with its various dreams and schemes.
And we're all trying to win the life
of the great kings and queens.

But sometimes we're too gullible
when we're handed that crown
because it's just leading to temptation
that will later knock us down.

We talk about our ups and downs
and of all our turns and bends.
But even the greatest ride
around our sun, must end.

We all play the fool
trying to win life's prize.
We're all simple players
even in God's own eyes.

We call Him unjust
with a game rigged of wire
that damns us all to "win"
that dreaded pain and fire.

We lose faith and not believe
some games are honestly ran.
We'd rather damn its purpose
and curse the working man.

I hope when I leave this world,
I'll have something wise within my heart
So when I enter those pearly gates...
the devil removes my mark.

©September 16, 2007 Lori S. Maynard "The Carnival Poet"

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Reviewed on December 19, 2007

"The Mark" marks the time of an ontological picture of vision and reality through its magnificent lines of art and heedful observation. A poem that honors the language and enriches the reader's mind.

In admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on October 8, 2007
A beautiful and heartwarming piece of one so down-trodden yet taking a turn standing tall. Well written piece....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed on October 7, 2007
Crisply penned, this reader identifies, having the same mark, the same feelings, the same struggles. But thanks to God for His saving Grace, His washing me white as snow! As imperfect human, I am made pure in His eyes, trials and all. :) Well done, Lori.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 7, 2007
Very well written, sharp images and scenes that blend ideals with reasoning. Very good Lori...
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on October 7, 2007
Lori, I found this to be sad in many ways, its terrible when one feels as though they've been marked by the devil because life has been so cruel. Life deals many a raw hand in this life and all we can do is to hope when death succumbs us we're dealt the right hand. This is profound and gave this reader something to think about. A great poem...definitely a keeper.

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on October 7, 2007
This is nice...you place one within a reflection of how humanity seeks the earthly or materialistic goals, and yet still they fall...better to be poor in wealth and rich in spiritual health...


nice work...


Art Sun...

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 7, 2007
Lori! I don't have words worthy of responding to this incredible sharing. That should tell you how respecful I am of what you share here. I empathize, believe me. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis


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