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Life Be ("T" Sun Am I)
by Mitzi Kay Jackson → (All Poetry by Mitzi Kay Jackson)
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This is my attempt to an event that has touched us all......by saying that I want it to be known that my process in it hasn't came in yet..............
*picture by artist Jason Phillips






enjoy anyway


Poem Artwork

Life be like gargantuan in all its magnificence
It be like raw with beauty
It move as love and fear
As do we
Life be like color connected through birth
…..and gorgeous pain
And changes
….changes
…….change
added with that element of surprise….shit
Life be like a book eternally being revised
And we paused
(Did you feel the colors?)
And to some there is no cause
(Evolving into one another)
But we all know the laws
(And the brilliance reaches and discover)
How the majesty of nature can be
Evil-well doers want to blame
race, religion, culture and humanistic themes
All in which she doesn’t see
“in biblical days” they say
with their words and phrases…shit
Life be like symmetry
In it’s gospel and infinity
And all those lives….taken between the color lines
(It’s only out of compassion)
And the so many tears we cried
(Capitalism is in fashion)
And the never-ending search for goodbyes
(See her as an assassin)
Knowing how the majesty of nature can be….shit
Life be like domineering
….sometimes in it’s rearing
And remembrance clever and artistic
………we will paint pictures in our minds
………we will paint pictures throughout the times
………we will prove assemblage of all kinds
even in between these lines
we will build and remember…then
…..we will do as we did before
(Hopefully better)
and we pay homage of the scores
(grateful we haven’t met her)
line ourselves in accord
(the majesty she is nature)
Cause we know the magnificent display
…….of her anyway….shiiiiit
Life be like sights unseen
in between the speed of sound
yes there are colours
the essence of youth blue
the perfection of time blue
the motion of descending blue
the creation of a new blue
the silence of an indigo ski at night blu
and in between these lines
……we pray for the souls abound
and the souls they touched, connected and found
that element of surprise surrounds us all
and they traveling as we too will
the loud aggression is silently ringing in our ears
and I take hold of the night
with my youth and time
with descending and creating in mind
i say a silent pray in indigo skies
Knowing that this is life



*see she be his life line
only her star shines at night
with powers to protect their skies
no matter the time they fly
by her grace
  

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 Reviews of "Life Be ("T" Sun Am I)"
Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)
Reviewed on January 10, 2005
Exquisite poem enjoyed it to the fulliest great pic too!

Reviewed on January 10, 2005
"Life Be ("T" Sun Am I)" prods the wings of the mind. I enjoyed the theme and the message.

Healthy Long Life Poet!


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 9, 2005
Life, it bees that way. A very original take on Nature's wrath, Mitzi.

Ron

Reviewed by elois Masters (Reader)
Reviewed on January 9, 2005
Yes. I love the taut lilting rhythm of this poem. Jones is right: the phrasing and thoughts sort of pull at your brain.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 9, 2005
Outstanding Mitzi!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Walter Jones
Reviewed on January 9, 2005
Each word dances, each thought pulls, every word real, class of value, hurts, too many eyes are closed, warmth is all that is left in the wishes I give. Please hreach for the best you can find.. Walt

Reviewed by Aberjhani
Reviewed on January 8, 2005
Sister these are some of the most heart-stirring and soul-provoking lines I have ever had the privilege to read. Thank you for stepping out and sharing them. If I were to dare to make a suggestion, I would suggest losing 2 0r 3 of the "shits." The depth of your ideas and the strength of emotion conveyed is powerful enough that "shit" and more "shit", for me, distracts from the overall mastery. Nevertheless, however you maintain it, the piece is brilliant. Peace.

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on January 8, 2005
This is a fabulous well-penned creation, Mitzi. Outstanding job, Poet!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on January 8, 2005
Love your take on this! Loved the repeated theme of colour. Yes nature is what nature is, nothing more. Great write.

Reviewed by ShyPoet 1
Reviewed on January 8, 2005
I've always thought of U as one of the best poets on AD, and anywhere quite frankly, now i know i am right!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 7, 2005
Very creative and original, Mitzi. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 7, 2005
You are amazing! Thank you Mitzi! You brighten the den with your light! love, Eileen

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 7, 2005
some many excellent lines to this masterful poem i feel like i've been liberated ...

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on January 7, 2005
Typical Humanity Will Never Listen Even When It's Too Late--They'll Still Be Haven Good Time Going To Hell_

Excellent!

TRASK

Reviewed on January 7, 2005
Wonderful creative poem! Thank you Mitzi for reviewing my poem. It's so nice to see you on the board.

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed on January 7, 2005
(((mitzi)))

::mouth hangin open:: you literally blew me away--GAD the power in your words--a keeper--thank you--

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 7, 2005
Life truly is many things - and this poem speaks boldly on many levels, Mitzi. Well Done!

Reviewed on January 7, 2005
Mitzi,

Absolutely stunning write; image; clever wordplay ... your poetic excellence never ceases to astonish - outstanding work!!

Best to you,

Robert

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on January 7, 2005
This is indeed a very powerful write and I agree with Sue and William.

Reviewed by William DeVault
Reviewed on January 7, 2005
Powerful and clear. An excellent write.

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on January 7, 2005
there is little i can say except bravo

Reviewed by Nicole Lasher
Reviewed on January 7, 2005
Amen.

Reviewed by Joshua Miller (Reader)
Reviewed on January 7, 2005
I like your work very much! This is no exception. It is difficult to review a masterpiece without detracting from it.


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