We were love
We were lovers
running.....dancing.....living
inside of each other
We could have shown the stars
how to shine
but the moment
didn't belong to you and I
We vowed that
when We die that
We would sell our souls
and fly
just ride the skies
stay so very
high
there was no
U without I
We said when
We have seen the world
and visit every water hole
when our wings got
tired and old
We would plant the ground
grow and be profound
and make
.......Shadows in Time
We will beautify
.......life
when ppl like ........We use to
be questioning Why
We....provide care
watch the growth of
an Eagle's heir
touching.......laying side-by-side
providing Shadows in Time
'Sahdows in Time' is a perfect title. Love the romance. I hope that you're doing great Mitzi, your poetry is fantastic. So talented my friend.
Janet xoxoxo
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on July 19, 2002
I agree with everyone I loved this poem. It brought images to my mind that I really enjoyed. Not sure if they are the ones you intended but they are nice. Angels turning into trees to protect and help the earth...side by side providing shadows in time.
Mitzi...you know how to write of romance and bring out the best in your heart. That is what truly showcases not only your talent but beauty as well.
Amor
Reviewed by RON P KING
Reviewed on July 18, 2002
lovely write mitzi very romantic i think.
Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on July 18, 2002
Beautiful write--beautiful love...
Reviewed by Scada (Reader)
Reviewed on July 18, 2002
If you have not already found this person, then I sincerely hope you do. No one deserves it more.
What a powerfully moving write, Mitzi! It brought a lump to my throat and tears to my eyes...beautiful! (((HUGS))) and love, my friend! Love, Karla. :)
Drkman
Janet xoxoxo
Amor
Love Scada
You have out done yourself with this one...
Great as always...
Trixie
the feel, well hell, darlin's thats your deal. nice write
Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$
Think the title describes it beautifully.
Morchuis
we were statues of butterflys
made of wind cloth
riding sun breezes
I enjoy your art ms