I forgive myself for the things I’ve done .
(Yes I am sorry)
I forgive myself for not having fun .
(Yes I am sorry)
The rope I gave was too short in length.
(I forgive myself)
The jobs that required super human strength .
(I forgive myself)
Yes I’m sorry . I put myself through hell .
(I need time to heal)
Yes I am sorry, soon all will be well .
(I need time to heal)
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Reviews of "I'm Deeply Sorry"
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on July 20, 2003
We all need our personal 'hospital' time. Good poem, Paul. Thoughtful.
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on July 20, 2003
Paul.. This is hard.. the unique, so very original style here demands comment.. truly interesting and it works great for the sentiments.. BUT.. the tone, the subject matter.. sigh.. you ok, Paul? kindness is not just for others'.. be just as kind to yourself.. you have such a true and wonderful voice. katy.
I ditto all of Krissy's comments. I know her comments from experience and as long as you believe in yourself, you'll never be truly alone.
Hugs,
Jill :)
paul,
forgiving yourself is the first step to healing. loving yourself, (flaws and all) is the first move towards being whole.
may you achieve peace.
hugs
krissy
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Hugs,
Jill :)
forgiving yourself is the first step to healing. loving yourself, (flaws and all) is the first move towards being whole.
may you achieve peace.
hugs
krissy