Excellent...I agree with the other two down below!!
love Tinka
Reviewed by britney reames (Reader)
Reviewed on March 29, 2007
I have had several relationships like this. Luckily I am with a guy who doesn't ignore me, but actually listens to what i say. I hate when the person I'm with does that. Your poem was very well done.
Wake up and smell the coffee (she might just get fed up and leave!) Well done. This poem takes you to a situation of neglect immediately and you just feel what's coming.
love Tinka