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Listen to Your Lover
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Listen to Your Lover

you love coffee shops
so you take her there,
bringing your laptop too.

coffee hot, your lady hot,
you bent over the keys
clicking some trash.

your cell phone rings
(you slob) you answer,
but your love's in the middle
of herstory, herday
and you listen to your
cell.

you see her eyes, but you turn
to watch the coffee traffic, cute
girls, ordering, playing
with their earrings.

pay attention, she's
leaning closer, saying her life
to your life, breathing her
pain to your understanding.

why do you look away?
 

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 Reviews of "Listen to Your Lover"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 29, 2007
Excellent...I agree with the other two down below!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by britney reames (Reader)
Reviewed on March 29, 2007
I have had several relationships like this. Luckily I am with a guy who doesn't ignore me, but actually listens to what i say. I hate when the person I'm with does that. Your poem was very well done.

Reviewed by Gloria Gay
Reviewed on March 28, 2007
Wake up and smell the coffee (she might just get fed up and leave!) Well done. This poem takes you to a situation of neglect immediately and you just feel what's coming.


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