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My prayer
by Shedding Light → (All Poetry by Shedding Light)
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( I wrote this poem just for fun, so to all of the poets who do not rhyme... pleaase don't take this too seriously)

I pray that God will someday bless, and help us
clean up all this mess: racial barriers and political
differences, scientists making illogical inferences;
all these scams and white collar crime, top notch
poets that don't even rhyme - conmen and theives,
and ass kissin' whimps; modernized gangsters
and space age pimps.

 

 

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 Reviews of "My prayer"
Reviewed on February 27, 2009
Hi Harold,

I'm late. But this is one good write and you said it all.

Best regards,
Cynthia

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on December 14, 2008
An excellent write. You have 110% vote and support from me.

Yours in Christ,

John Michael Domino

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on October 20, 2008
Bravo! Well said, Holly

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 20, 2008
I appreciate and agree with your prayer, Harold. Thank you for sharing it. Love and blessings to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on September 19, 2008
Love, love, love it, Harold! I think this is wonderful. It tackles serious topics but in a sufficiently "light" way so as not to bog the reader's spirit down.

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on September 14, 2008
I pray this will also happen Harold.. Goood thinking write!...M

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on September 13, 2008
Great writing as always sweet man...have a wonderful and safe day OK..I sure did miss reading your wonderful words..glad to be back...Hugs

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on September 12, 2008
You speak such truth in this...but in the meantime, we're here to enjoy and live life, and to try to clean up the things that you have written, about as best we can, so that we and our children can enjoy a better world. I am not part of those who believe that "the world is going to hell in a hand basket." I see the world as a special place that WE are to take care of as our Father would want us to. Good writing!

Reviewed by Linda Law
Reviewed on September 8, 2008
We are dreaming aren't we? Sad but true... lindalaw

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on September 7, 2008
Harold,
I don't think anything will be cleaned up till Jesus comes again. Nearly every day in my little town I hear of shootings and robberies, so sad. I miss the days the world was a safe place to be.

Many blessings,
~Linda


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