The painting is by Alex Booth of the U.K. Poetic, isn't it?
To a Poet’s Poet
Just a few words strung together. Just a few pictures wrapped as words. Tied with a little string instead of a bow. Just a few hearts, just a few hands, reaching for the warmth of skin remembers it’s flesh. Just a few hints of essence of rose. Coffee in the morning, bread warm from the stove. Nape of a neck perfumed with soap. Just a bit of paper, not a few piles of eraser bits. Just a bit of heartbreak, just a little loss. Soupcon of broth from an outsized ladle to feed a multitude on very few fish. In between a thrill goes too deep to be prose. Just the thing about being human. Just the rhythms humans hum. All this and more you bring us, Poet. Bring out on a platter you keep warm, Napkin with a smile. Just a few tears. Okay, a lot. Poetry spelled L I f e not at all like falling off a log. Real thank-you poem not a little hard to write. Best to read the poem penning itself inside.
... Just the thing about being
human. Just the rhythms humans hum.
All this and more you bring us, Poet.
and
... Best to read the poem
penning itself inside.
Like my teenage friends tell me, awesome.
Gus
Hilding "Gus" Lindquist
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 4, 2005
The poem is much more poetic than the painting. I do not mean that in a disparaging way, I just feel that poems should stand alone, and on their on, without all the trappings which are so popular these days. I can understand why people want to put images on their poems, but I also understand that it . . . is . . . NOT . . . necessary and in some cases a distraction. I loved your poem, especially the feeding of the fishes.
Food for thought and you wrapped this up very simply and neat and I'll take this poem with an apertif and some After Eight Dinner mints. Thanks Phyllis! I am calmed. Relaxed to the max, smelling the essence of rose.
Victoria
... Just the thing about being
human. Just the rhythms humans hum.
All this and more you bring us, Poet.
and
... Best to read the poem
penning itself inside.
Like my teenage friends tell me, awesome.
Gus
Hilding "Gus" Lindquist
love and peace, Carole
Felix
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
beautifully with a symbolistcal VOICE that enchants
the soul and nourishes the mind.
Long Healthy Creative Life, Sublime Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
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Carmen
Sage
excellent poem ,poet ...