When in Doubt (poem) by Phyllis Jean Green on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 18, 2006

enjoyed the read

Reviewed on January 25, 2006

Poetic excellence in "When in Doubt" flows.

Keep posting, Poet!

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on January 10, 2006

the body knows and the mind controls, flying a body without its control is dangerous, especially for us guys, watchout girls he's following his on, his mind is gone, hehehe

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on January 8, 2006

My body says I'm an old foggie but my mind says don't pay any attention to it. So I don't. Thanks for your nice review.

George

Reviewed by Robin Labenberg

Reviewed on January 8, 2006

A delight as always to read you..I love the way you carefully chose your words..wonderful words..I think from time to time my body has done all of these things even though I keep trying to tell it I am young! At least in mind and heart as are you Pea!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on January 7, 2006

I totally agree the body knows when we are in doubt. Very clever!

Reviewed by Sandra Mushi

Reviewed on January 7, 2006

The body knows alright. Great write, Pea! And a happy new year!

God bless,

Sandie.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on January 7, 2006

Pea,

Keep preaching, I hear ya! Loud and clear--outstanding write. :) Enjoy the way you think!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on January 7, 2006

We are what our bodies tell us; but our minds often play the magic of how we feel otherwise.

I enjoyed this piece you write, Pea!

Happy New Year to you!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 7, 2006

Words and phrases tantalize and tease the senses in this fine write and I think it is one of your finest Phyllis.

Felix

Reviewed by Only A Poet (Reader)

Reviewed on January 7, 2006

a deep poem with many shades, i was forced to think! no the mind cannot overrule the body forever. enjoyed.

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on January 7, 2006

I like this one Pea it is so insightful and well written. has a dual postivie upbeat :)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 7, 2006

Very well expressed....well done Pea!!

The first stanza says it all!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Rhonda Taylor

Reviewed on January 7, 2006

The body DOES know..I liked it..
Rhonda

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on January 6, 2006

Yessss....the body knows--->some of us wear it well, hanker for it to find us....hard to shut the heartbeat of desire out--->the risk the body sustains in event the EVENT becomes payable! Prototype mind covered by a lavender garment from sooooo long ago, a winding sheet of the past screaming to revive long-thought-dead issues but NOT! A mind wrinkle ironed--->a pucker-up-give-me-one-HERE--->a wet pleat THERE! Yes--->the body knows--->tells you it is easier to open a window than it is to close a door in these golden years. The clock ticks that Dr. Pepper clock--->10--->2--->4. Memories on the move, heartbeats rage, then drop off irregular. Scream and shout, get it out, Pea!

Sage spelling out WHEN IN DOUBT with her BeDAZZler rhinestone tool

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed

Reviewed on January 6, 2006

The body is a real tough character. . . sorta like a collection agent on our youth!
blessin's Sis. Pea, I like this a lot!
cynth'ya

Reviewed by Marcia Duning (Reader)

Reviewed on January 6, 2006

If in doubt.................punt!

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on January 6, 2006

Oh Pea, it's all in your first stanza and I hear you loud and clear. In fact, all too well. Some will call it positive thinking; I think the operative word is denial. No matter what you write about, I love what you say and how you say it. Oh you... wise woman!

Carmen :-)