A lovely offering Pea, we must be on the same wave length, I wrote a piece on birds last night also...always a pleasure reading you! love and peace to you...
This is a striking composition with ecological-ontologic reality and symbolism. When "Winged-ones Concur" is read, the reader will feel the ignition of imagination on a creative flight.
Reading "Winged-ones Concur {Rev'd to Clarify}" was a learning privilege.
The imagery in this one sings...pleasant to read (and see). Very, very well done--I love the way your mind works. :) Succinct. No wasted motion or words. BRAVA, Pea!
Interesting and a joy to read as always. The birds are so much apart of out lifes and we often take them so much for granted until we do not have them anymore.
Hea Baby, you are galloping right on along with Sweetwater! This reminds me of those carrier pigeons now that you mentioned the mailbox in the same breath as the Carolina wren. I went into Library of Sage this morning and retrieved my bird book. YES...there it is, the Carolina wren. Beautiful and full of song like you, my colorful friend, Pea!
B'lieve part of the reason George found the original version confusing {thanks, George <3} is that I used present tense throughout. Wondered if it was a mistake when I changed to past re the beginning. Anyway, I revised the 'thang.' Hope it is clear. My friend The Texas Tornado appears to have gotten the drift. . .but then she is a very generous soul. Gives me A's :). ~~ Reckon I'll stand by this. . .for awhile, anyway. B l e s s i n g s, 'Pea' <3
A further collection of poems, many from years in the Middle East, but also the California San Francisco and Central Coast areas (Santa Cruz, Carmel, Big Sur, Berkeley, etc.).
My book of poetry is being redone by me, I have a beautiful cover designed and the book will have a few more than 200 poems in it. I am going to have it printed on demand here in Canada. When it is done I will let you know when it is done and if anyo
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Reading "Winged-ones Concur {Rev'd to Clarify}" was a learning privilege.
Keep posting, Poet!
Long Healthy Life through a Blissful Living.
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(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
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you are like me. when we are on a roll, we ROLL! i did two stories in an hour! LOL check 'em out at your leisure! :)
wonderful write as always; very well done! brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :D