Rain has to qualify, this one won't make the cut. Tickling doesn't count, I whisper around an untouched pillow. Gentle was for hippies. Quaint term to google. Oh, but it is sweet to lie comforted by your refusal to give in to the urge to pound. So good, you turned in your drum. Sometimes play brushes, I hear, when not filling in. Tickling your night gig? Feel you on my skin, flesh feathers make me entertain the hope that you, at least, will stay your sweet self. Only tickle until I blush. Feed me, sweet rain. Hum something silly. Hum Purple Rain. I cracked the window. Slip in and we'll pretend to be here for each other. Have all the sugar we want. No cavities. Tickling never turns to torture, thunder is only air clapping far, far away. Closing my eyes. Even smell sweet. Come here.
Intriquing images here that remind me of lying on the banks of a stream in the heat of summer neath that gentle rain. Perhaps the old hippie in me coming out.
A further collection of poems, many from years in the Middle East, but also the California San Francisco and Central Coast areas (Santa Cruz, Carmel, Big Sur, Berkeley, etc.).
Poetic magnificence comes in "Candy Rain".
Keep them coming, Poet, the world must read You!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
A Masterpiece, in my mind, Pea-girl! Love the way you lovingly crucify/adore all selves/self. Candy lover, nevertheless.
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Hugs,
V~
Carmen :-)
love and peace...Carole
Birgit and Roger
Mikii
Love it!!
Love Tinka
Felix
Eileen
Awesome imagery in this feel good write--well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.