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Past Time to Tack
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This is a work of imagination. Something on the o r d e r of 'based on a true story'. . .but with extra liberties taken. As you know, for far too many people, Alzheimer's Disease and other memory-stealing disorders are a fact of life. None of us are immune. Sometimes it happens to the person we count on most when it comes to talking things out. Talking to others may or may not help, but keeping our feelings bottled hurts.
As for the rest, the boat and the comments people made about the slab of foam with a sail -- and the couple attempting to sail it -- were real. The emotions -- the sadness, the anger, the anxiety, the empathy, and yes, fear -- are real. It is the story 'en toto' that is fabricated.
Thank you for being here. It means the world.
'Pea'

   
The little red boat.
The fishermen.
Sun turning lemon.
Water going flump, flump, flump
We were at the quiet end.
Me in a cotton bikini
I had made.  Seersucker,
I believe. You were plastered
with sunscreen to keep from burning.
Army examiner once put down,
“complexion ruddy.”  What
a laugh.  But we are on the lake.
Jordan, I think.  Casting off,
a woman put down a pail to point,
“What is that, a biscuit tray?”
But sail,  we did.  Okay, okay.
In our fashion.  Sailors, no way.  
Ask the three beered-up fishers
who rowed by when we were  too far
out. “You guys aren’t married.  Look
too happy!”    Flump, flump, flump.  
Swelling cloud’s got us worried.
Best turn around.  Not the words
I try on friends next day. “Tacking’s
for the birds,” I remember going on.
“Rain starts to spit. . .we are, like, Help!”  
Best part the shower we took.
The tingle.   Suddenly finding
we are not tired, after all.
 
Now you can’t remember
the little red boat.
Fishermen.  Sun.  Flump
and the biscuit tray are gone
along with my name.
Along with yours.
Look at the picture again, okay?
Let me tell you what I
recall

 

        (c) Phyllis Jean Green, 2007
               All Rights Reserved.


 
   

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 Reviews of "Past Time to Tack"
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on June 20, 2007
so touching it is hard to find words-

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on June 20, 2007
Oh, Pea this one brought tears to my eyes and touched my heart and soul. What a beautiful write and beautiful memory. You are right my friend many time many of us take our memory and health for granted. Alzheimers disease doesn't have respect for anyone, it could strike any of us at anytime. My mother is a caregiver for a longtime family friend whom was diagnosed with alzheimers disease nearly five years ago, the disease has progressed slowly and she was blessed with physical health otherwise, she is a joy the visit and my mom thinks of her much as a mother as she was a dear friend of my mamaw and papaw and was also my fourth grade teacher. It's a tragic disease that is so sad. Your write is very gripping and powerful, makes one stop and count their blessings. You've expressed it very well my friend!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on June 19, 2007
This one touched me deeply Pea, having lost my life long friend and mother to alzheimers at Thanksgiving...thank you for sharing your wonderful talent for words...

~Carole

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 18, 2007
Moving write Pea!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on June 17, 2007
Heartfelt piece. Lady J

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 17, 2007
After watching a close relative suffer with alzheimers I know just how tragic a disease it can be...it steals the soul and heart so memories so treasured can never be foung again.

Fee

Reviewed by Linda Luna (Reader)
Reviewed on June 17, 2007
I just finished working internship this past year in hospital with elders - many with Alzeheimers. So hard for family and friends as your prose captures so well. Thank you for expressing so well - I will share with others as comfort.

LL*

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on June 16, 2007
Past memories or a time, a place, a grain of sand in the spectrum of life. So sweet and tender a write this is of a day shared, a blissful memory.....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Helga Ross
Reviewed on June 16, 2007
This appeals to me very much. I like that its' spare in form yet rich in evocative mood and detail. (i like your reading list too--no wonder you write as well as you do. :)

Helga


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