I discovered an embarrassing error {inadvertently omitted 'never found' following 'shoes worn once and shoes'}, and decided the title needed work. If this is your second 'case' of bunions, I apologize. Just really, really want this one to work. Thank you so much for your forebearance. Your feedback has been very helpful. xOx P xOx
Memory pastes another random cut-out: female an angel to me. I watch her flesh out from her sweat- frizzed hair to the angry bunions torturing the roots of both big toes. In a voice rusted from disuse, she confessed to setting them free with pinking shears. Cutting easy. Cheap perforated boats. Blocks for heels, like the ones on what my mother sneered were Eleanor Roosevelt clodhops. Memory props the angel's unsunned face and bent body at a board that groans beneath a basket piled high with gold- monogrammed finger towels, tennis frocks, gowns impossible to press. Ruffles, ruffles, ruffles. Basket refills like the pool of tears in an Aesop's fable. Filler the servant of a butterfly whose shoes require their own closet. Needle heels and custom- dyed silk for evening; blinding tennis sboes; flapped golf shoes; PTA shoes; shoes that Do Lunch; shoes that mince to teas and dinner after at The Club; shoes worn once, and shoes never worn. Army had such, goose-steppers wouldn't know what hit.. Basket ain't empty by 4:00, be the devil to pay. Iron hisses. Never scorches, but a burnt smell mixes with baked rhubarb and whiffs of a man's whiskey breath. Board wobbles. Child on a pallet strewn with newsprint and crayons easy to break. Flesh worn to a nub. Angel looks rained on. Collars, pleats, sleeves, yokes, cuffs fog her cellophane-taped specs. Thick-as-pudding War stockings sag and bag. Dress not swallowed by that apron has no shape. Kitchen scrubbed raw. Cupboard leans, and the doors stick. Corner-hugging sink skirted with graying checks. Jarred soap slivers gray together, trying to school. Her old man unglued from that chair by the window, slunk grinning to the front room to make smoke rings with butts fished out of sand and salt smoke with choice words for President Give-Away and Winston Churchill, aka FDR and Don't Ask. Kitchen linoleum cracks open as it rises and falls toward the door to a jam-packed backporch. Color a ragtag coat navy and wrap the angel. Time sees her walk wincing to a blood- streaked dawn. Downtown, across the bridge, half slide down the bank. Frozen earth finds the holes, then water. Angel walks until frizz floats, then nothing. Old Man River, Old Man River. Some hearsay, all fact. Fact she never missed a Sunday, and was denied "Christian burial." Fact I cling to: in the river is a gate, led through to warm and dry. Anyone irons, it is for her. Fine linen, very best silk, cashmere subtly dyed. Memory turns over a sheet of newsprint, grabs a crayon, designs matching shoes. Fit like a dream.
(c) Phyllis Jean Green, 01/08 r.i.p. Mattie
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Reviews of "Goodbye Bunions {fr. Camera Obscura I -194_} { R E V I S E D}"
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 25, 2008
So much here, sad and in away joyful, yet i feel i can't do this justice. AS I could go one forever about America and the worlds greatest leader in Churchill, with the not so brave FDR, and the american banners on the sports pitches wanting us to die.
Robin Ouzman Hislop's poetry is certainly in dialogue with some of the key architects of the 'poetics of indeterminacy' – both the Modernist strands represented by the likes of Beckett and Stein, and the postmodernist strands represented, initially,
Yet america helped us win a year or two faster,,,
Loved it first time 'round; made even better by slight touches...by a true artist's hand. Beautiful. LOVE what Fee (below) said. :)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
well done
Fee
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D