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Goodbye Bunions {fr. Camera Obscura I -194_} { R E V I S E D}
by Phyllis Jean Green → (All Poetry by Phyllis Jean Green)
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I discovered an embarrassing error {inadvertently omitted 'never found' following 'shoes worn once and shoes'}, and decided the title needed work. If this is your second 'case' of bunions, I apologize. Just really, really want this one to work. Thank you so much for your forebearance. Your feedback has been very helpful. xOx P xOx



                                                   
Memory pastes another random cut-out:  female
an angel to me. I watch her flesh out from her sweat-
frizzed  hair to the angry bunions torturing the roots
of both big toes.  In a voice rusted from disuse, she
confessed to setting them free with pinking shears.  
Cutting easy.  Cheap perforated boats.  Blocks
for heels, like the ones on what my mother sneered
were Eleanor Roosevelt clodhops.  Memory props  
the angel's unsunned face and bent body at a board
that groans beneath a basket piled high with gold-
monogrammed finger towels, tennis frocks, gowns
impossible to press.  Ruffles, ruffles, ruffles.
Basket refills like the pool of tears in an Aesop's
fable.  Filler the servant of a butterfly whose shoes
require their own closet.  Needle heels and custom-
dyed silk for evening; blinding tennis sboes; flapped
golf shoes; PTA shoes; shoes that Do Lunch;  shoes
that mince to teas and dinner after at The Club;
shoes worn once, and shoes never worn.  Army
had such, goose-steppers wouldn't know what hit..
Basket ain't empty by 4:00, be the devil to pay.  Iron
hisses.  Never scorches, but a burnt smell mixes
with baked rhubarb and whiffs of a man's whiskey
breath.  Board wobbles.  Child on a pallet strewn
with newsprint and crayons easy to break.  Flesh worn
to a nub.  Angel looks rained on.  Collars, pleats,
sleeves, yokes, cuffs fog her cellophane-taped specs.  
Thick-as-pudding War stockings sag and bag.  Dress
not swallowed by that apron has no shape.  Kitchen
scrubbed raw.  Cupboard leans, and the doors
stick.  Corner-hugging sink skirted with graying
checks.  Jarred soap slivers gray together, trying
to school.  Her old man unglued from that chair
by the window, slunk grinning to the front room
to make smoke rings with butts fished out of sand
and salt smoke with choice words for President
Give-Away and Winston Churchill, aka FDR
and Don't Ask.  Kitchen linoleum cracks open
as it rises and falls toward the door to a jam-packed
backporch.  Color a ragtag coat navy and wrap
the angel.  Time sees her walk wincing to a blood-
streaked dawn.  Downtown, across the bridge, half
slide down the bank.  Frozen earth finds the holes,  
then water.  Angel walks until frizz floats, then
nothing.  Old Man River, Old Man River.
Some hearsay, all fact.  Fact she never missed
a Sunday, and  was denied  "Christian burial."
Fact I cling to: in the river is a gate, led through
to warm and dry.  Anyone irons, it is for her.
Fine linen,  very best silk, cashmere subtly dyed.   
Memory turns over a sheet of newsprint,  grabs
a crayon, designs matching shoes. Fit like a dream.  

                 (c) Phyllis Jean Green,  01/08
                                   r.i.p. Mattie




 
 
 

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Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 25, 2008
So much here, sad and in away joyful, yet i feel i can't do this justice. AS I could go one forever about America and the worlds greatest leader in Churchill, with the not so brave FDR, and the american banners on the sports pitches wanting us to die.

Yet america helped us win a year or two faster,,,

Reviewed on January 25, 2008
(((Pea))),

Loved it first time 'round; made even better by slight touches...by a true artist's hand. Beautiful. LOVE what Fee (below) said. :)

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 25, 2008
Our poetry like our lifes are always open to changes and revisions...they belong to us and only loaned to the world.

well done

Fee

Reviewed on January 25, 2008
Even better now, Pea; it was good the first time, but somehow you managed to make it even better! Very well penned; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on January 24, 2008
i like this--it has much to say and does so very well


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