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surgery at ten
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amputation is not a word to cultivate
the sound of, suddenly everything
I see is legless
or limping traffic signs have     one
trees get along quite well
without 'rehab,' appears to     me
flowers stand, unless it rains
terns and flamingos show off
but everyone else has two
or four or a hundred
is a centipede     God I can't
remember when I used to hate
my k n e e s
for being so unsmooth, ever so
slighly bowed
or when I said I hate   to   walk
in this heat     (this cold
this storm)       this shot
will make you sleep, Hon,
she said sweetly     Later another sleep
will keep stepping
away

(c) Phyllis Jean Green, l988


Poetic Liberty awarded surgery at ten first prize in July, l988 . It meant...still means...the world to me, because I wrote the poem in honor of my beloved
father-in-law, Joseph Edgar Green. Dad had just lost a leg to diabetes. But although he was in his 80's and had other health problems, too, he soldiered on for several years, seldom losing his wry sense of humor. He was a kind, sweet soul who taught me what it was like to have a father who truly...unconditionally....cared. I will always miss him. Phyllis

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 Reviews of "surgery at ten"
Reviewed by Felica Stanley
Reviewed on June 11, 2003
He was a very special man with a wonderful daughter-in-law! The poem is sensitive to a painful situation. Love you.

Reviewed by Janet Buck
Reviewed on April 19, 2003
This poem hit me right between the eyes. I shouldn't be surprised by your compassion because it's in everything you write, but the subtlety of this and the power of this left me speechless.

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on July 31, 2002
well deserved......wonderfully beautiful tribute.....very lovely poem

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on July 31, 2002
Beautiful although sad write...it makes a fitting tribute
Amor

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
Reviewed on July 31, 2002
Your father in law sounds like a wonderful man... This poem was exceptional.

Reviewed on July 31, 2002
awww, hun...(((HUGS))). what a sad, painful write this is. TEN!!! for your courage and this tribute to your father in law. (((HUGS))) to you, my dear phyllis. love, karla. :(

Reviewed by Sailor Neptune (Reader)
Reviewed on July 30, 2002
painful...


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