A Dissertation of Love (poem) by John Rockie Coppolella on AuthorsDen

A Dissertation of Love
by John Rockie Coppolella → (All Poetry by John Rockie Coppolella)
Rated "G" by the Author.

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Like Madame and Pierre Curie, Love bloomed in the laboratory. We should all be so lucky!
Quivering dichotomous masses, Shared a binaural beating heart, Souls intertwined in stereo, Dreamed of creating a star! Lightning in a plasma cloud, + Cosmic thunder in a jar, = Implosion of H + He+ O, Viola! Nuclear fusion starts! The mathematics involved was complex, They worked feverishy into the night, Formulae applied started the fire, Bringing explosions of energy and light! The university became famous, With the reward of the Nobel Prize, Both shared the coveted honor, The physicists were very surprised! 3.2 years after Dad married Mom, Their accolades were lavish at first, The passion of their love once ablaze, No longer quenched the Dad's thirst . 32 anniversaries came and went, Their kids all were now grown, Cruelly ignoring their mother, Running her from her home! 320 trips going around the sun, Their poor mother K. still live on, Dad and Kid's skulls overgrown, Thickets poking through eye holes, Centerville now keeps their bones!

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler

Reviewed on January 12, 2009

Love they say makes the world go 'round. Though all things pass away given enough time, love will always abound. Thank you for this excellent write.
Blessings J'nia

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip

Reviewed on January 5, 2009

Excellent! A short epic (is that an oxymoron?) written with knowledge aforethought! I enjoyed it, Rocky.
Best regards,
Leland

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on December 2, 2008

You have got me thinking, Rockie. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on November 29, 2008

Rockie,
Your talent shows in this clever write. BRILLANT!

Many blessings,
~Linda

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on November 28, 2008

Rockie, there are no limits to what love can accomplish
in and out of the lab. -gene.

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)

Reviewed on November 2, 2008

Creative thoughts...and put into this writing in a unique way.
CarolHawks

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on October 28, 2008

Outstanding depicting of an ontologic vision through the lenses of a learned soul... "A Dissertation of Love" glows by the Sirius of Poetry.

I salute You, Poet.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on September 29, 2008

Nice writing,enjoyed...be well and always safe...Hugs

Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat

This tells the story of life in a most unusual manner. Love the metaphors. Great poem.

Mary