From where I stand, the sky curves
though I cannot see it casting shadows
Horizontal such as the distant field
where blood spills in mythic battles
It seems to me the constellations poise
in the blue-black sea of night
Keeping distance parallel to months
constantly moving after taking flight
Some were named after ancient Gods
and some animals that are found on earth
while some planets brightly come and go
and are said to rule over us from birth
I am one who may defy those gods
for my beliefs are reserved for one
The same who created all of heaven and earth
and all else underneath the sun
Yet, I remain in awe of such majesty
as I am fascinated by their light
Though I am limited by the bleach of day
and then cleansed again another night
The battles raged are between warriors
stretched beyond time in distant space
and Goddesses in the midst of galaxies
who disappear at dawn without a trace
From where I stand, the sky curves
a wheel of influence upon our lives
each time I look into the blue-black night
to spy the heavens until dawn arrives
A BRILLIANT BREATHTAKING MASTERPIECE AMOR!!!!
I can't pick a favorite line like I know some like to do...Y...because the WHOLE PIECE is a favorite!
<Click into my library it goes>
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~
way way cool, I like battles between warriors, Zena was my favorite tv show
"The battles raged are between warriors
stretched beyond time in distant space
and Goddesses in the midst of galaxies
who disappear at dawn without a trace"
Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)
Reviewed on October 12, 2003
Your pen flows magnificently well today. Terrific write!
~Jackie~
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 12, 2003
Wonderful write on the night sky. Interesting insight into you. Great ending!
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on October 12, 2003
The heavens I guess are the biggest of mysteries..
I love looking at the dark, blue, night skys myself
excellent write Amor
Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on October 12, 2003
This is perfection! You rip into everything here! I love it! Your visuals and chronology....the usage of Gods & galaxies and everything was amazing! PER FECTION! I don't know how to review this. Breath taking truth. This is probably one of my favorites of yours, it goes into the library. You blew me away! Fine fine work!
Thank You,
Emilie
pssst....lmao at Rage ... I love his raw truth and opinion :)
A change of pace for you Amor, beautifully done. I love the premise and agree with you, though the universe is an ever evolving neverending mystery, so we will have many surprises, I'm sure;-).
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on October 12, 2003
"Though I am limited by the bleach of day
and then cleansed again another night "
Amor these are some fantastic lines with great imagery in this write...I love to gaze up at the night sky and wonder...just what is up there...loved this poem so well written...floria
"Yet, I remain in awe of such majesty
as I am fascinated by their light
Though I am limited by the bleach of day
and then cleansed again another night "
((Hugs and LOve)) ~SilentDream
Peace 2 U,
cynth'ya lewis reed
love&light,
**Me**
Reindeer
I can't pick a favorite line like I know some like to do...Y...because the WHOLE PIECE is a favorite!
<Click into my library it goes>
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~
A true gem of a write...
Trixie :)
"I am one who may defy those gods
for my beliefs are reserved for one
The same who created all of heaven and earth
and all else underneath the sun "
Amen!
Love Tinka
Love, JC xoxoxo
"The battles raged are between warriors
stretched beyond time in distant space
and Goddesses in the midst of galaxies
who disappear at dawn without a trace"
~Jackie~
I love looking at the dark, blue, night skys myself
excellent write Amor
Thank You,
Emilie
pssst....lmao at Rage ... I love his raw truth and opinion :)
.... third attempt to post..
new kitten on the keyboard
and then cleansed again another night "
Amor these are some fantastic lines with great imagery in this write...I love to gaze up at the night sky and wonder...just what is up there...loved this poem so well written...floria
"Yet, I remain in awe of such majesty
as I am fascinated by their light
Though I am limited by the bleach of day
and then cleansed again another night "
Jenni
"Though I am limited by the bleach of day"
Tami