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Shock and Awe!
by Lloyd Lofthouse → (All Poetry by Lloyd Lofthouse)
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One teacher's classroom--first draft written in 2002 after arriving home one day from the classroom.

 
At night, one overworked custodian
          vacuums moldy carpets
In a half-ass fashion
          leaving invisible droppings behind.

During the day, fine dust becomes
          a dull blade slicing through lungs.
Bronchial tubes flutter— wheezing
          like a dying bird’s wings.

On cold nights fear fills the lung's fine filaments
          but on Thursdays
The crew arrives once again to cut grass
          while asthmatics sit in nearby classrooms.

Working men with masks
          walk behind mowers and blowers
Pushing dust laced with chemicals
          into defenseless lungs.

Students and teachers
          are enveloped in noisy clouds
Challenging brains already on edge
          limiting learning.

Snotty infections
          fill sinuses.
The battle for breathing begins
          as inhalers deliver unsafe steroids.

Unexpected painters arrive another day
          sending acrid fumes through vents?
Distracted red eyes are chased by verbs and nouns—
          the battle once again lost in a system gone mad.

What happened to the night shift?
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 Reviews of "Shock and Awe!"
Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine
Reviewed on December 6, 2008
In a place where I worked, the night shift was cut to save funds -- not lives or good health. Sad commentary. Very thoughtful poem. R

Reviewed by Juliet Waldron
Reviewed on November 3, 2008
And we wonder why we are all dying of immune deficiency diseases, and why we can't breathe--yes, watch my neighbors drenching their lawns with chemicals--and then being surprised when they have cancer. Nothing like helping the teaching process as you describe...

Reviewed by Keith Rowley
Reviewed on November 1, 2008
Neat!

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on October 31, 2008
Lloyd,
this is fine writing with strong imagist precision and confidence of phrasing, and the theme powerful and all too true.
John

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on October 31, 2008
I couldn't have said it any better than what Gene just said...and isn't that the truth...great writing dear man...Happy Halloween to ya...be well and always safe OK...HUgsss

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on October 31, 2008
It is all too obvious and frightening that there is
no shortage of stupidity in the world. -gene.


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