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HE CAN SEE.
by Kay P M- Devenish → (All Poetry by Kay P M- Devenish)
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HE CAN SEE.

YAHWEH can see
what's happening to me,
HIS eye
is my
record of events,
it's my only guarantee
of a justice yet to be,
viewing faithfully
each moment's circumstance.

He was there in MY night

and he watched with clear sight

as THE Enemy's snare trapped me in
and he saw my heart bleed
as he views every deed
in my crawl up this mountain... to Him. 
 

He can hear every cry

he knows how hard WE try

He knows EVERY-wound that has been

and he wants us to rise

from all evil and lies

and BE STRONG in HIS glorious being.

 
Yahweh can see
what's happening to me
and that's how I manage to stand...
though my soul hurts from stones
thrown hard at their bones
by THE demon's angelic-clad hand. 


On this road that I crawl

I may stumble and fall

but I keep rising  up by HIS love

and one day (BY His grace)

I MAY look in the face

of the one whom reigns higest above..

 
Yahweh can see
what's happening to me...
Yahweh can see...


Yahweh...

CAN

SEE.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Footnote:

 

 

I have been on a spiritual journey and am still on it ,still searching for knowledge .Watching the movie 'The Passion of Christ' had a deep effect on me I found I needed to know more about Jesus' (his real name was Yahushua ) and his life ...as he was then... in his own time and own language...I have only just begun to find the right  answers for me...I believe I have finally found what I have been looking for but I still am only at the start...finally I knoww that the correct name for what I once called 'THE LORD ' is actually meant to be YAHWEH  (Heavenly Father) and the word 'GOD' is (from the old texts )actually  is "Elohim' if any of you want to email me privately I can let you know the site where I finally got my information.The poem below is my old poem but I have redone it using the new and more correct wording,I personally feel I would rather use the words that The Messiah used.I have put this note here especially for my old friends on this site as I know they have wondered why I have been away from writing  poetry for so long,I still am not back to myself and the pace I once kept Re -writing but I am preparing myself to do more in future,I truly have been blessed to have had YOUR INFLUENCE touch my life and I hope you like the changes I have made in this old poem of mine.Hugs AND LOVE From Kay.

 


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 Reviews of "HE CAN SEE."
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on January 14, 2012
THIS WONDERFUL KNOWLEDGE IS WHAT GIVES US THE ABILITY TO GO ON. THE WORD OF GOD SAYS, '...I WILL KEEP HIM IN PERFECT PEACE, HE WHO KEEPS HIS MIND STAYED ON ME...' SO, NO MATTER 'WHAT'S GOING ON'... YAHWEH...HE 'CAN' SEE AND...IS IN TOTAL CHARGE OF IT ALL! THIS IS A KEEPER KAY...AN AWESOME WORK OF FAITH...THANK YOU FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on August 9, 2008
Yes, God can - most excellent!

Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader)
Reviewed on April 16, 2008
A beautiful and eternal Quest you are on. One that the Lover of your Soul is drawing you to. A wonderful love story like none other unfolded before my eyes as I read your poem above. Well Done! Deborah

Reviewed on April 16, 2008

"HE CAN SEE. (Plus a note.4 my friends" BEAUTIFUL, BEAUTIFUL, BEAUTIFUL Kay I am overjoyed for you all blessings and much love.
"He can hear every cry
he knows how hard WE try
He knows EVERY-wound that has been
and he wants us to rise
from all evil and lies
and BE STRONG in HIS glorious being."

Take the best of care,
~Gwendolyn


Reviewed by Robert Blackwell
Reviewed on April 13, 2008
Thank you for expressions past and reflections present in this work.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on April 12, 2008
That is a beautiful testimony, Kay.

Elizabeth

Reviewed by Stan Grimes (Reader)
Reviewed on April 12, 2008
Woncerful work. Self-discovery is a marvelous experience

Reviewed on April 12, 2008
Miss Kay,

Have wondered where you've been - I've missed you! What a glorious report - keep your eyes on Yahweh, He will never let you down. I promise!! Beautiful write of faith. Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, your sis in Christ, Karla.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 12, 2008
Kay having taken for granted these things that you mention,I never knew you were on that journey,! Catholics have always called him Yahweh,protestants, Jehovah,and jews Elohim...Your poem is splendid,with the new additions, but even before, anyone reading it would have thought you knew our Savior very well!Thanks for sharing and all the best with your continued study!
Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on April 12, 2008
Always keep the fath dear one!
SMooooooooooooooo0000000000000CH!
Love ya!
Ron

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on April 12, 2008
Strong faith is helpful in any life, good to see you, Kay...Peace, Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed on April 12, 2008
Indeed He can! Very well penned, Kay; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

So nice to see you again; you've been missed! :)


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