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Rivers in pipe. repost.
by Kay P M- Devenish → (All Poetry by Kay P M- Devenish)
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Rivers in pipe .

You're their sister you should have helped them,

you're their brother you should have cared,

you're their family you should have come when

t hey were thirsty,you should have shared.

I was with you watching them dieing,

I was with you right by your side,

we just stood there saying it 'was aweful'

we just watched as they all died.

We're all family

all of us children,

we all dream underneath the same old moon,

lets build pipelines running full with  water

let's save a thirsty human soon.

We can do it ,we have the brain power,

we have the muscle,we have the heart,

Lets send water just like a rain shower

running in a pipeline ,let's all start.

We're their sister ,we should help them,

we're their brother ,we should care,

we're their family ,we all should come when

they are so thirsty,we all should share.

We're all family,all of us children,

we all stare at the beautiful moon,

lets build pipelines

 running full of water,

let's help the thirsty children soon

we have  walked upon the moon

so let's build river- pipelines SOON.

 

 


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 Reviews of "Rivers in pipe. repost."
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 19, 2003
an extremely powerul commentary on the human condition...

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on July 19, 2003
Great one!
Smoooooooooooooooooooooo0000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000Ch!

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on July 19, 2003
7-19-03

TOTAL STRSANGERS Helped Me More Than My Own Family! Don't Look Back...

TRASK

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on July 19, 2003
Excellant Kay!!!!
I am so glad you reposted this and I had a chance to view this truly magnificent touching piece of truth!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Steve Ralph
Reviewed on July 19, 2003
this is an excellent poem Kay and so true,
you would think we could help others with water by now wouldn't you.
steve

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on July 19, 2003
Well done. I like the repetition of lines and it gives the theme impact.

Reviewed on July 19, 2003
excellent write, kay! (((HUGS))) :-)

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on July 19, 2003
Kay,

What a powerful and compassionate write. This needs to be published so that many can read and possibly bring about action.

~Joseph

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on July 19, 2003
Wonderful poem with deep meaning.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 19, 2003
Kay you are such a compassionate soul! This is wonderful, and I agree with Ted. You should do a collection of social writes as you do them so very well. They evoke much empathy from your readers, because you have the gift!

Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on July 19, 2003
beautiful, thanks for sharing

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on July 19, 2003
Kay,
This is an excellent poem.
Yes good weekend my dear Aussie friend.
PJ

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on July 19, 2003
This is a very good write, you should do a collection of these using the social content.

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on July 19, 2003

This is poetry from the soul my friend. Some of the best poetry comes from that place I swear. Excellent heart you have.

Thank you,
Emilie

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 19, 2003
Thank you for sharing this "Help/pipeline..
And thank you for your support on my last poem...I will hold on as long as I can......but today came and messed my whole life up!!!
If I where ever blue ...today are theeeee bluest day of all!!
And feel like giving up everything!! Even my poetry!!

Love
Tinka


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