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Is it raining inside you?
by Kay P M- Devenish → (All Poetry by Kay P M- Devenish)
  
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Raining pain.











Is it raining there inside you?
It LOOKS as if there's rain.
The way you walk,
the way you talk,
those eyes so deep with pain.

I know you're not the type to cry,
you bear all that you can,
but pain's deep trace engraves your face,
and indicates...'a dam.'

Is it raining in those walls,
those walls of flesh and veins?
There's a thunder when you move,
that says...'INSIDE... it rains.'

Don't let your walls store the rain,
don't hold it there for years,
open up your window eyes,
and drip out stormy tears.
Un-dam the bolted upstairs door,
let words of turbulence out-pour.
Let the waves inside tide out,
whisper drips, or spurt a shout.

Is it raining in your walls...
the walls that dam your pain?
Release the well,
life's burden tell,
My friend...let out your rain.


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 Reviews of "Is it raining inside you? "
Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)
Reviewed on July 4, 2004
This one is excellent.
Sometimes we build up the walls inside of us, to keep love and emotions out as we don't want to get hurt anymore. But what if something inside of us has to get out? The only way is to break down these walls again.
Enjoyed this one very much

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on December 12, 2003
Therapeutic advice lovingly expressed. Thank you. I can use some. Love and peace, Regis.

Reviewed by Trixie Love
Reviewed on December 12, 2003
Hi Dearest Kay,
This is a real keeper...
Outstanding words...

Hope all is well with you.


Love & Hugs,
Trixie :)

Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on December 12, 2003
it's always raining inside of me, I think I need to put up some gutters to catch and carry off my rainwater
beautiful work Kay

Reviewed on December 12, 2003
Kay, beautiful and wise advice in this excellent poem!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on December 12, 2003
Kay...wonderful write...enjoyed much!!!!

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
Reviewed on December 11, 2003
Right on, this is excellent advice and poetry. Also, I love the art piece by you on your bio. Happy Holidays.

Love, Janet xoxoxo

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on December 11, 2003
Kay, beautiful poem. It's never healthy to hold it in.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 11, 2003
Thank you for sharing this Kay!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on December 10, 2003
when our minds become soaked with stormy weather a little emotional rain certainly refreshes things ... excellent poem!

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on December 10, 2003
Kay,
Beautiful and compassionate poem..

Peggy

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on December 10, 2003
Kay what a wonderful poem! great content and advice wrapped in your special way that's just beautifully okay when it's from our Kay!;-)

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on December 10, 2003
Excellent advice and well written!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on December 10, 2003
This is quite beautiful Kay, I enjoyed it immensely (sp?), peace, Ed & rufuz

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 10, 2003
Wonderful poem, Kay, and Excellent Advice!

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on December 10, 2003
Beautifully done in your special way. I love this Kay.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on December 10, 2003
Un-dam the bolted upstairs door,
let words of turbulence out-pour

..think I'll DO just that!!! thanks Kay...
Great write!!!
PS will reply to your mail tomorrow..oxoxxoox

Vesna :)

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on December 10, 2003
No not now, but when I do my boots get full of tears.
This is a terrific write Kay..
Love ya!...........Ron

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on December 10, 2003
Kay this is so wonderful and wise advice. A pleasure to read.

Reviewed on December 10, 2003
(((kay)))

if i let out the rain, i'd drown everybody :)

beautiful, caring write--i live with pain twenty four seven, yet i go on, because i have to...no one wants to hear of my troubles

i have it no worse than others...why add to their rain/pain?

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :)


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