Happy valentines day to all the darling poets on authorsden,I love you....I truly DO love you so very much xxx kisses and LOTS OF big warm hugs for you all.
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If I give you the muscle that beats inside my chest, (the one that pumps and thumps and pounds, without a moments rest.) If I give you that muscle... with its valves and chambers too, will you promise not to crush it, or break it clear in two? F o r … I cannot let you have it, unless you hold it dear, (as dear as ALL the world to you, f o r e v e r , with YOURS near). And… IF… you say you 'promise’, my heart is YOURS to take, but know... you CANNOT give it back, or EVER... let it ...B R E A K .

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Reviewed by Vesna / Vanessa Perkovic |
2/13/2004 |
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Ohhhh Kay..this is such a magnificent write..indeed our hearts a re strong but at the same time so bloody fragile..don't ya reckon' Thanks kiddo for this great write..loved it!!
vesna {{hugs}} |
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Reviewed by Lori Moore |
2/13/2004 |
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Thank you for the re-post. This is great! |
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Reviewed by Trish MacQueen |
2/13/2004 |
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Excellent and expressive poem. |
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Reviewed by Ch'erie Perrette |
2/13/2004 |
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OOoh fingers crossed aye! Love is positively the most risky thing innit, still we do it. Top poem and I'm glad you revamped it TY Hugs Ch'erie |
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Reviewed by Grady Morrison |
2/12/2004 |
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This is a great piece Kay, I really enjoyed your poetic approach. love and peace G |
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Reviewed by Robert Jude(Ace) Forese |
2/12/2004 |
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a valetine poem that honestly expresses your heart, i one i admire ... |
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Reviewed by AKA ShyPoet1 |
2/12/2004 |
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I really enjoyed this poem - well done! |
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Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
2/12/2004 |
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I am not too good at Valentines day writes, but apparently by this example, Kay, you are the best I have read so far, thanks, Ed & Rufuz |
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Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
2/12/2004 |
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lovely as is creative Kay..... Thanks for being Kay... x0x0x0x0x0x |
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Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse |
2/12/2004 |
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Love this one Kay....I love to pull old ones out and rework them....great poem..floria |
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Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
2/12/2004 |
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This was so powerful and beautiful Kay, I loved this,
Reindeer |
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Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
2/12/2004 |
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Great write! |
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Reviewed by Trixie Love |
2/12/2004 |
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Hi dearest Kay, Such a lovely write...
Hope all has been well with you dear lady!!!
Hugs, Trixie :) |
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Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
2/12/2004 |
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Awwwwww..if only Kay!!
Just love your litle guyes at the bottom!!
Love Tinka |
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Reviewed by Peggy Bertrand |
2/12/2004 |
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AH i agree with Eileen.... This is so well done Kay!!!! Beautiful.... |
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Reviewed by Eileen Waldron |
2/12/2004 |
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ahh if only it could be that way dear Kay! Excellent poem,a powerfully written beauty! |
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Yesterday's repost,(too tired to write new one,)just had to let you know I am thinking of you all today with sincere affection.
(((hugs)))
♫ Jackie
blessin's K.
cynth'ya lewis reed
Best regards,
Leland
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Love Tinka
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Cute little graphics you put on your page..
love them
Sandie Angel :o)
P.S. Couldn't send you the CD because you have not included your ZIP code and your suite number. Please write to me again and let me know. ~ SA ~
Love, Janet xoxoxo
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Beautiful and heartfelt! Thank you for sharing..Lisa
right back at you, too...smooooooooooooootch! :) happy valentine's day!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. love the write, and the animation awwwww :)