The Visit - Poem by: Linda Law (poem) by Linda Law on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 4, 2008

Your feelings of sadness and numbness were felt by her. She came to you to tell you that she still looks out over you. You are very lucky indeed, to have this connection with her...Bless you.
Peace, love, and angel light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on October 4, 2008

Wonderful writing sweet lady...be well and always safe...Hugs

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 3, 2008

Last night I was feeling tired and sad, don't know why
Watched a movie, then felt numb inside...life just goes by

Sometimes moments like this are the catalyst to much more happening around one's self. I know what you write of here, Linda. Love, hugs, and blessings to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on October 3, 2008

Oh Linda you are so right, When my Mom went to heaven I kept her bottleof perfume, I loved her smell when I hugged her and even now after 13 years when I smell her beauty I know she is here with me. You are not alone as so many of us go through this dear, wish I was there to ive you a hug and a chat with a nice cup of tea. You have a wonderful day.

Newfie hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce

Reviewed on October 2, 2008

You always know when you smell that familiar smell that your mother is paying you a visit. I had that feeling in many instances.

Wonderful write!...also you look lovely in that pic with the smiley face!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)

Reviewed on October 2, 2008

Cherish the visits...as some still wait for them.
You have written a touching poem and I am sending you a hug.
CarolHawks

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on October 2, 2008

It's been 18 years since my Mom passed - and today would have been Daddy's 78th birthday, had he not died in May - how I miss them - beautifully penned - tears are running down my face from the power in these lines - well done, Linda -

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on October 2, 2008

Oh boy, know that feeling well and I am sure your prayers were all answered, very heartwarming piece.....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on October 2, 2008

This is truly touching.Your smile can bring light toward any darkness.I enjoy reading it,take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on October 2, 2008

Touchingly beautiful, Linda! I can relate! Thanks and be well.

Reviewed by Keith Rowley

Reviewed on October 2, 2008

Beautiful. Personal. Poignant.

Love truly is eternal. And you are an amazing person.

Keith

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on October 2, 2008

Life's memories never fade.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on October 2, 2008

Linda, the end to this was so very touching and a surprise to me. Nice work.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 2, 2008

Wonderful writing, Linda; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on October 2, 2008

It is funny and sometimes a little wonderful that we can feel our mother's presence (or sometimes our fathers) even when years have eaten up the memories we had. My own mother has been gone almost thirty years and yet I still feel I hear her singing or looking at me with love and understanding as if it were only yesterday, and yea damn it my own teardrops have started too...
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Linda Law

Reviewed on October 2, 2008

That's okay Bonnie... I cried when I wrote it too...that's why I plastered my usual smiling face on the poem....to remind me not to cry... People only see me smile...except on here!...... lindalaw

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on October 2, 2008

Oh we have all cried that cry and I'm crying now. Never expected the ending, you'd be great at suspense writes or mystery novels. Great write and thanks for these blasted tears. Love ya though, Bonnie