Who will offer me forgiveness
For something I should have known
We - you and I - were so busy pretending you were fine
Pretending you could do it all
Your fall took us by surprise ... but did it really?
You said you were always so careful ....
But carelessness did not cause your fall
It was optimism and the belief that life would never let you down
I can't forgive myself for letting you down
For joining in the game of pretending nothing bad would happen
Yes - I warned you but knew in my heart I couldn't stop the very force that keeps you going
Forgiveness will stay elusive for me
As we danced the dance of pretending
Life would never change.
Copyright 2009 Susan Williams
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Best wishes always
from
Kay
To stand by(although you may be quaking inside) is a great compliment and a generous helping of loving support. "I believe in you" may be the most valuable gift we can give.
A touching poem.
Connie
Edwin
Be always safe,
Karen
Sometimes it's hard to predict the future. I know what you're talking about here and it wasn't your fault at all. You're venting and that's good. Beautifully written poem.
Cousin Mary