This poem will turn out to be different
for everyone. . you fill in the blanks.
An exercise.
We met on a Friday night
by Sunday I ____ _____
You looked into my ____
telling me how much you
_____and_____me
You brought me ______
After a night of ________
together we went to ____
I never laughed so hard. .
You were practically ____
it was time to say ______
but I could only ________
You held ____ and _____
We kissed and _________
each _____we _______
keep _____ _______
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Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on October 9, 2009
We met on a Friday night
by Sunday I was smitten
You looked into my eyes
telling me how much you
adore and wanted me
You brought me love
After a night of being
together we went rollerskating
I never laughed so hard
You were practically crippled
it was time to say,tomorrow?!
but I could only cry
You held me and smiled
We kissed and promised
each other we would
keep in touch
I stayed within the counted spaces you gave & here is my fill:
We met on a Friday night
by Sunday I bamboozled you
You looked into my satchel
telling me how much you
chuckled and mocked me
You brought me pralines
After a night of chocolate
together we went to Kmart
I never laughed so hard. .
You were practically intoxicated
it was time to say bye
but I could only laugh
You held horns and whistles
We kissed and laughed
each giggle we snorted
keep your wits
Well couldn't resist giving this a try so here is my stab at filling in your blanks...
We met on a Friday night
by Sunday I dreamt of heaven
You looked into my soul you see
telling me how much you
believed in and desired me
You brought me wine and a blanket
After a night on a sandy beach
together we went to orgasmic heights
I never laughed so hard love in reach. .
You were practically insatiable
it was time to say forever
but I could only hold you
You held me and we said never
We kissed and pledged eternal
each day dreams live not to grieve
keep our hearts open to love
and just believe…
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by Sunday I was smitten
You looked into my eyes
telling me how much you
adore and wanted me
You brought me love
After a night of being
together we went rollerskating
I never laughed so hard
You were practically crippled
it was time to say,tomorrow?!
but I could only cry
You held me and smiled
We kissed and promised
each other we would
keep in touch
We met on a Friday night
by Sunday I bamboozled you
You looked into my satchel
telling me how much you
chuckled and mocked me
You brought me pralines
After a night of chocolate
together we went to Kmart
I never laughed so hard. .
You were practically intoxicated
it was time to say bye
but I could only laugh
You held horns and whistles
We kissed and laughed
each giggle we snorted
keep your wits
what is the original? :)
We met on a Friday night
by Sunday I dreamt of heaven
You looked into my soul you see
telling me how much you
believed in and desired me
You brought me wine and a blanket
After a night on a sandy beach
together we went to orgasmic heights
I never laughed so hard love in reach. .
You were practically insatiable
it was time to say forever
but I could only hold you
You held me and we said never
We kissed and pledged eternal
each day dreams live not to grieve
keep our hearts open to love
and just believe…
hugs
Fee