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Our ' First ' Time
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I was nervous, restless Somewhat unsure... My whole life waited For this anticipated day When we met...I knew You would be my 'love' My first time Our first time I wanted everything To be right...memorable It was already right You chose to be with me.. .. ..

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Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on February 4, 2011

the last line in your verses is beautiful Deb
and also offers one to ponder our fate
by being chosen, or choosing...

The Bounty of Love's Choices
Vickie

Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat

Reviewed on February 3, 2011

D.L.,

The first time is always the sweetest and memorable when you're with the right person. Very beautiful.

Mary

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on February 3, 2011

Very romantic piece.

Reviewed by Christine Volkoff (Reader)

Reviewed on February 2, 2011

Ah, so simple, gorgeous, and moving...great poem!

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on February 2, 2011

Love the ending....
fee

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on February 2, 2011

A dynamic experience...with a beautiful ending!
Christine

Reviewed by John Bidwell

Reviewed on February 2, 2011

It was already right- love that.
Beautiful!

John

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