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I Thirst
by D. L. Vegas → (All Poetry by D. L. Vegas)
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I thirst your soul
It holds all that you are
All I wish to know
You have captured
My heart in such a way
That I will never be the same
I thirst for your love
Are you willing to commit
To tell me your truths
Leave the lies
Tucked in a suitcase
I want to know everything about you
I thirst to hold you
And love you strong
To tell you all of my fears
To cry my tears
My love has never been stronger
Say you want me too

 


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Reviewed on November 8, 2012
An honest and all inclusive unconditional love, as love should be. Wonderful poem Deborah.

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
Reviewed on November 7, 2012
May your thirst be quenched
*Deborah* from love's well

Lady Vivian

Reviewed on November 6, 2012
this is lovely Deb
everyone should "Leave the lies"
love withers otherwise

Luther Vandross & Love's Language
Vickie

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 6, 2012
Sorry, can't say that right now… ;-)

Ron

Reviewed on November 6, 2012
You are such a loving soul Deborah
If they cannot see this, it would surprise
me...

Love and Light
Lily

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on November 6, 2012
So beautifully phrased, Deborah!!! Yours is a truly romantic heart!

Anna

Reviewed by Gert van Weenen (Reader)
Reviewed on November 6, 2012
It's almost a plea where you show your heart in all it's vulnerability.
I hope something beautiful comes out of it Deborah

Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
Reviewed on November 5, 2012
May she leave the lies in the suitcase and throw it over the canyon wall, loving you like you've never been loved!

Peace,
Dayvid

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on November 5, 2012
A lot to ask I guess, which might make him step back. I understand the one about "To tell me your truths / Leave the lies" completely however. I lived with a woman for many, many years and I confessed all my dreary past, she withheld hers. It came calling about ten years before she died. We were never the same. Withholding is the same as lying.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on November 5, 2012
i hope you got the answer you wish for you deserve it
budd

Reviewed on November 5, 2012
Yes, you certainly are asking for a commitment. I hope you get it!

Love ya!

Jane


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