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To Finally Breathe

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

With so much death in the world, one is compelled to wonder on such a moment. Regardless of one’s belief system, might that split second be the transition to but the next iteration of existence… transcending any supernatural or scientific speculation of what is?

Friday, May 4, 2012

To Finally Breathe

This cadence of a last breath
This moment to determine
From where one’s final rhythm emanates
Mirrors childhood
Adolescence
Even that much dreaded final curtain of maturity

Will parade its swell and gasp
A Rite of Spring paradox
Ingested forever
Becoming the intravenous surge of finality

Will it have a peccary’s duplicity
Able to flow with a flowery resonance
Or the prickly shrill of cacti
Knowing life is but a rabbit in the hat?

Will the baby breath of suckling contentment
Make silent intrusive memories of first-love betrayal
Or
Might the crackling rock of roll
Make tamboured expansion of racing energy
Produce a heave
A final extolling of breath well spent

Oh how tenuous the choosing
This last moment
This ultimate attempt

To finally breathe
 



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Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on May 5, 2012
"...Or
Might the crackling rock of roll
Make tamboured expansion of racing energy
Produce a heave
A final extolling of breath well spent..."

now that didn't just jump off your keyboard, Odin,
that was thought through and mulled over
as i'm mulling over it now and over
this entire challenging, edifying poem

john

Reviewed by Paul Judges
Reviewed on May 5, 2012
Very well written, Odin

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on May 5, 2012
Death's mystery. Until someone "actually" passes on and comes back to relate to us what it on the other life of life, we will still worry ourselves about it. The greatest question man faces, what, if anything, happens after death.

Reviewed by Sandi Schraut
Reviewed on May 4, 2012
As one who is facing this very scenario, I wish that all may find that those last moments have meaning,have impact on the living and become a lasing picture that lives with the remaining souls until they themselves pass on! It would make me sad if the ending was just that, a passing into oblivion!


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