Nocturnal Pawn
by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com
To awake from certain kinds of disturbing dreams arrests how the pawn of a chessboard or a pawn at a Sell and Loan shop fit the inevitable "pauses" that intercept time and make us consider options.
Saturday, January 19, 2013
Nocturnal Pawn
by Odin Roark
Storefront of tattered cloth
flaps with brine laden dust
circling shadows bid welcome
as candles alight clouds
evoking loathsome tears
lives extend on feasts of
doors once open
now but lingering entrails of smoke
dancing the dirge of funeral chatter
packaged sentinels of guideposts missed
parade before rushing gutter lanes
awash with midnight’s seduction
dissonance whispers one’s opera of chaos
sleep behind vaulted cages
holds fast the numbered combination
while memories claw at tags
and muted screams chorus the Frieze of Life
a toss
a turn
mere commas for dreams of soured aftertaste
searching yet another grainy claim check
pillowed deep beneath
nocturnal pawn
Quite a powerful piece.
is our real nature in our dreams more than in waking?
you paint here, Odin, in vivid detailed image
and it is good, it is very good indeed
john
Ron
Roger