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· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

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· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

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· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· A Place...

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· Truth is One


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· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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But A Blip...

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Following recent news regarding asteroids, I was intrigued with today’s announcement that Earth was temporarily visited by a 3rd radiation belt of trapped particles. John Grunsfeld, NASA’s associate administrator for science, said: "The fantastic new capabilities and advances in technology in the Van Allen Probes have allowed scientists to see in unprecedented detail how the radiation belts are populated with charged particles and will provide insight on what causes them to change, and how these processes affect the upper reaches of Earth’s atmosphere."

Friday, March 1, 2013

But A Blip...

How elusive
This hide and seek cosmos
Allowing us to remain
But a blip
Tenuously safe
On Time's infinite screen

Existence forever changing
Lures man's eyes and ears
Toward layers of nothingness
Whose density
Remains temptingly
The everything of epiphany's lair

To be there with distant stars
We exercise our prerogative
We dream another learned entitlement
Continuing to play out assumed superiority

Yet for some thinkers
Perceived freedom
With its implied randomness
Remains an unrealistic concept
Logic dictating correct thought and action
Conclusively deterministic

For dialectics can develop conclusions
Arising from given sets of postulates or premises
But resignedly
That is all it can do
Incapable of generating premises itself
Resulting experience remains sterile
Capable only to expand
Not to grow
Such a state being void of creative ability

Still

Our spec-identity on infinity's screen
Deludes itself with a Pac-Man sense of conquest
Consuming all it can
Unaware its insatiability

This paradox of creativity and devouring
Will inevitably reduce our sentient existence
To an even smaller blip
Eventuating cosmic dust
Swirling within reason's captivity
Perhaps paving the only way
To be with the distant stars



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Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on March 2, 2013
here is another fine write for us to ponder
budd

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on March 2, 2013
'For dialectics can develop conclusions..'

indeed so and there's no end to it but it goes
nowhere really - you're so right, Odin;

i've always felt small..all i need do is look
up at night and right away i know my place

it's 'star season' here!

john

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on March 1, 2013
Wow! We are but a dot on the radar.... Well done!

Reviewed on March 1, 2013
everyday it seems there's one more mystery and one less thing we know. Thanks for this write.


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