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· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

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· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

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· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· A Place...

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· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


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· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

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There Once Did Live...

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Interesting how a certain memory can take on a life of its own.

Sunday, October 20, 2013


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There Once Did Live...
by Odin Roark

There once did live
This tree now of charred tenacity
With crumbling faithful statue of strength
Steadfastly stationed atop its roots

The stone statue of Hercules
Father placed so long ago
Now defaced with apple in his mouth
Made buffoon by children
Enjoying hijinks of youth

There once did live
My fortressed escape
With hammered sticks as steps
Giving flight from reality
My stronghold in the sky

This tree that housed so many dreams
Now but a burned out cavity
Remains of remembered life
Entombed by climbing vines

Flowered embracing round its trunk
Reaching up left and right
Forgetting not the limbs
That once shaded its mythical protector
Now with mouth crammed of apple

How cruel
Yet forgivable
The ignorance of youth
An age clinging tight
The few years it has

And how impassioned we become
Upon visiting where once I did fantasize
My own kind of mischief
Hidden by the branches and leaves
Guarded by mythology I knew little of

Yet

Yet today…

How prescient this head of stone
Askew like a court jester pondering me
Seeming able to laugh at himself
As I remove the apple
Coaxing from me as well
A grin of acceptance
  


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Reviewed by Tao Chi
Reviewed on October 22, 2013
Oh yes, "Yet, yet today......" that is the place to be. Accepted by wisdom. Removing the apple that represents the silliness of the inner child. All was predicted long ago, that as time went on man's consciousness would surely regress. And looking at stuff today and what people talk about, yeah, "Idiocracy", watch the movie. I've called that movie the prophetic movie of the century. Sure did better than Nostradamus, well actually I can't remember all his predictions. Everyone WATCH THE MOVIE....

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on October 21, 2013
much here to contemplate
budd

Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on October 20, 2013
All memories should end with a grin. M.True

Reviewed on October 20, 2013
the last stanza adds such finality, to be able to glimpse a view from the tree tops of childhood and grin is a treat indeed!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on October 20, 2013
As well we will all laugh with bellowing guffaws at the youth we were then and the youth we are today.


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