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· The Kite That Would Not Bow

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· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

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The Drift

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Figuring out the resolve to all our challenges just may not be in the cards…or part of nature’s plan.

Tuesday, January 7, 2014


Poem Artwork
The Drift
by Odin Roark


How far such distance?

One’s birth is so innocent
Only to be lifted
Set alight to learn gravity

Where emotions
Intellect
Transcendence
All vie for a bit of influence

Such small minds
Of gaping eyes
Gaze at the unknown
While adults
Parents
Teachers
Clergy
Smile

Announce without foresight
Welcome!

So goes the drift
That levitational ricochet
Set up by massive influences
Bumping
Pulling
Shoving
Trajectories destined for…

Who knows?

Unknown reason
Becomes one’s journey
Even though some assume an answer
Wisdom suggests
We may not have a clue

Nature doesn’t play the same games
Human species wallow in
Our intelligence betrays us
Tricks us into believing
We have the answer
When all along

What if there be no confirmations
Only delusional answers?

Will we still plod forward
Believing we can overcome
The enigmatic gravitational force
That which often pulls our heart down
Usually into sadness
Our mind
Usually into crushing disappointment
Our souls…

Well

I’ll leave that to the supernaturally bright
The elite who know not drifting
At least not until…



   


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 8, 2014
Another philosophical blockbuster. We are all caught up in the drift, one way or the other. It is interesting how you point out that some are thought to be elite and above the fray, but no one really is. We never know which way disaster may come and change things drastically.

Ron

Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on January 8, 2014
Indeed we are unsettled by our own misconceptions. The Fickle Finger of Fate being the first suggestion, in this young mind, of a life beyond control. M.True

Reviewed by Tao Chi
Reviewed on January 8, 2014
It is inherent for humans to have a desire to discover the mystery of origins, have a desire to journey for the purpose of finding oneself, seek knowledge, spiritual wisdom and yes many find "delusional answers" and think it is the truth, then discover it is not, how disappointing. Disheartening. It's nice to gain worldly and spiritual knowledge, but in the end, it really does not matter.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on January 8, 2014
you have written so well of those endless possibilities
budd

Reviewed by Ruan Mills
Reviewed on January 8, 2014
I love the open ended trail because, of course, you/we could go on and on. The possibilities/probabilities are endless.

levitational ricochet - fabulous phrase!
Rx

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on January 7, 2014
"Nature doesn’t play the same games
Human species wallow in"

These two lines is the poems' guts.


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