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Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

· 3 WAY MIRROR


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· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


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· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Unclimbed Stairs

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

I know, I’ve probably overstated this, but: to be or not to be…who you are. Is it the never-ending unanswered question? (photo by timboydwhite)

Wednesday, February 26, 2014


Poem Artwork
Unclimbed Stairways
by Odin Roark

At the base of the stairs
He lay on his back
Upon his chest
He propped his hero

Peering up through GI Joe’s
Stand-your-ground stance
All seemed climbable
Just like in the movies

But he knew
Summit of the stairs
Was the attic
That frigid place
Lures of the forbidden
With air suffocating its captivity
Like his mother warned

Such was the explanation
Penned studiously by the doctor
Connecting the dots
Of thirty years subsequent

The strategy of solipsism
Where more forbidden climbs
Ensnared him with madness
And a padded enclosure

The doctor thought he had control
But the man/boy knew
In front of him
Just a mother in a cheap suit
Warning
Always warning

Was Van Gogh warned?
Was David Foster warned?
Is the next Hoffman going to be warned?

Check your stairways
To the bathroom
Safe
To your bedroom
Probably safe
To the attic of adult life

Oh my
Caution
Or
Instinct

Here we go



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Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on March 6, 2014
Being crippled by fear may be the true essence of hell itself! M.True

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 27, 2014
Your metaphor is powerful for all of life is climb just as life is always climbed out of the sea. Some of us make it and some of us don't. Are we to delegate those on lower rungs to lesser lives?

You seem to deviate when you move into mental illness. Perhaps that is a way of describing those unable to climb.

Ron

Reviewed by Eileen Granfors
Reviewed on February 27, 2014
I love this. If I were still teaching, I would share your poem with my 12th graders. So much to consider about handling life's challenges. Well done.

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on February 27, 2014
Teddy Roosevelt had this to say on the same subject: "It is not the critic who counts; not the man who points out how the strong man stumbles, or where the doer of deeds could have done them better. The credit belongs to the man who is actually in the arena, whose face is marred by dust and sweat and blood; who strives valiantly; who errs, who comes short again and again, because there is no effort without error and shortcoming; but who does actually strive to do the deeds; who knows great enthusiasms, the great devotions; who spends himself in a worthy cause; who at the best knows in the end the triumph of high achievement, and who at the worst, if he fails, at least fails while daring greatly, so that his place shall never be with those cold and timid souls who neither know victory nor defeat."

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on February 27, 2014
many are tempted to sit on the bottom step while others sit on
the second from the top..but if we don't go all the way we lose
and if we do there's an equal chance we'll lose..i've no idea where to go except to go on
Thank you, Odin

john

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on February 27, 2014
Taking a chance on the climb.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on February 27, 2014
written so very well
budd


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