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50 Floors Up

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

A prosedy exploration into the “preferred life” residing somewhere within all of us.

Wednesday, April 23, 2014


Poem Artwork
50 Floors Up
by Odin Roark

Window washers hold firm
As screeching scaffold
Belays their destination stop
Floor 50

Bearing winds and exposure
Akin to alpine climbing
They perform routines
Absorbing reflections unique

Below them
Weather
Skyscraper rooftops
Anthill humanity
Above them
More everyday reliance
Another floor
Another paycheck

New Yorkers find momentary wonder
As they plant their walking habits
Firmly to the pavement
Looking up occasionally
Year after year
Floor after floor
Only imagining the thinking
Suspended hundreds of feet above

As the harnessed professionals
Wash away grime’s history
Behind tinted glass
Worker bees move through
Career-combs of service
Whirling digital futures
Computerized existence
Fashion clad
Policy enslaved
Ambition trapped
Yet to fully understand
Freedom is what power
Wishes to allow

Occasionally…

A see-through window
Reveals these anonymous identities
Bent over dreamers calculating their security
Desk after desk
Monitor after monitor
Entry after entry

Lunchtime beckons
As Paulo and Sam’s altitude appetites
Take brief respite from cleaning chores
Relax in their safety gear
Unwrap their bologna sandwiches
And gaze at the clouds
They smile
They laugh
They nod
“Good, eh”
“Yeah, good.”






 


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Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on April 29, 2014
I never tire of your ways of describing the business world. I think your bin of descriptions for this world "....dreamers calculating their security" is bottomless. It is like you have more than 360 degrees of looking at absurdity and even more for describing it. Magic carpet rides are what your poems are for me. This one really went up ! I truly did not miss "Absorbing reflections unique," for I never thought of that benefit for the Alpine Experience professional squeegie wielders. I also learned something here from your New York experience...I didn't know NY'ers ever looked up. Do necks in that City really go that direction also? No disrespect intended; I just enjoy your physical details of people, individual and societal. Yellow highlighter happily glides across: "Freedom is what power/Wishes to allow." And that the sandwiches are bologna and not alphalpha sprouts over tuna packed in water. Really good. ~~ Diana

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on April 24, 2014
Love it! A different perspective on the vertical city.

I just read a article on the five cities with ridiculous housing costs. With Manhattan being an island, and space limited, the only way is up and the cost of up is even more. I do doubt if a window washer can live where he works. And the friendly Starbucks or McDonald's worker on street level only has to work 180 hours per week to pay his studio apartment rent. Isn't progress great!

Ron

Reviewed by Dark Knight
Reviewed on April 23, 2014
When I see people so high up cleaning I think " no way would I do this " liked your poem

Reviewed by Tao Chi
Reviewed on April 23, 2014
Love Bologna sandwiches.


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