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· Perceptions

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· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

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· The Kite That Would Not Bow

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· Truth is One


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· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

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All Was Peace

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A contemplation of what a final remembrance might be like. (Image by SaroltaBan)

Sunday, June 29, 2014


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All Was Peace
by Odin Roark

Traveling window to window
served only to reflect
what once was.

Seashell after seashell
to his ear brought nothing,
save the beat of his fading heart.

No matter the food or drink,
only the salt of his tears
roused palate’s reception.

To touch fallen rose petals
brought only remembrance
of her velvet lips long past.

His park bench solitude
amidst summer rain fragrance,
now but memory’s redolence.

Such became sensory’s demise,
life’s reaching tendrils exploding,
dispersing the ravens atop
winter’s darkened dawn.

All was peace.
 


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Reviewed by Tao Chi
Reviewed on July 3, 2014
Anything (pic of someone dear, song bringing back memories, a Memorial) or anyone worthy of one's heart that is lost never a "final remembrance ". But when your brain no longer remembers anything or anyone "final remembrance ", ahh, there is peace but your still alive. That's how I perceive it. Beautifully written, brought tears to my eyes. My son gave me a beautiful rose plant, I often go Puck a rose, the smell is so strong, I walk in a daze smelling each petal as I pull them one by one. Before I know it I've left a trail of pink rose petals in the yard.

Reviewed by Andy Turner
Reviewed on June 30, 2014
Stark reality hidden by an innocent beauty. Or so it seems.
Cleverly done.

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on June 30, 2014
Profound ~ captures the pain of being detached so amazingly well.
Chris

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on June 30, 2014
Seashell after seashell
to his ear brought nothing,
save the beat of his fading heart.

... such a picture of fading hope and remembrance. Solitude, sadness and silence powerfully depicted. xx

Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on June 30, 2014
I note with some not so little reverence a silver tongue wrapped around a chunk of coal. Such is the canvas of the true artist. M.True

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on June 30, 2014
Both touching and sad, but I guess The End could be much worse.

Reviewed by Ruan Mills
Reviewed on June 30, 2014
Oh! If only the end could be so peaceful! They say, when you reach the end, your life runs through your mind. This, you have expressed very elegantly and most tenderly.
Rx

Reviewed on June 29, 2014
The rose petals and velvet lips gorgeously romantic. A tender yet dramatic take of The heart. It will fade if it can't see taste or touch . And the last line, simply wonderful poem.

Reviewed on June 29, 2014
You have painted a vivid picture of a person on the park bench probably spending his final hours only in remembering and dreaming of the beautiful moments in his lifetime. A beautiful way to step into the Afterlife!

Sandie

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 29, 2014
It would be nice to know that going out was like that, a poetic remembrance, a dream.

Ron


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