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Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

· 3 WAY MIRROR


Short Stories
· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


Articles
· War and Peace

· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


Poetry
· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Patient Whispers

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

With fate being a course of life that will occur because of or in spite of one’s actions, and destiny remaining a set of life’s preordained events that one has the choice of taking an active course in shaping, or not… why do so many acquiesce to fate’s seeming end game of no choice?

Tuesday, June 9, 2015


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Patient Whispers
by Odin Roark

Unlike the cyclic waves of fate’s ocean roar,
destiny patiently laps the shore,
beckoning we perceive the endless choices,
of ebb and tide forbearance.

How unfortunate…

So many walk life’s shorelines unmoved,
remaining cynical like the gulls lining water’s edge,
allowing the bombastic curling-wave sameness
to insure more habitual indifference.

For those venturing beyond the shore…

Destiny’s patience reminds often
of fate’s ever-threatening slavery,
where inland’s tumble weeds of impotence
roll with listless abandon,
bouncing aimlessly through
denial’s ghost towns,
breath once of vibrant potential.

At journey’s end…

To walk such streets is to wade through
swirling torn photographs never taken,
the ones remaining but dreams
now littering the dusty streets of inaction.

Possibly history’s echo will keep alive
reasoning’s patient whispering,
hopefully moving fate’s gray clouds aside,
allowing destiny’s light to break through,
be absorbed,
embraced,
and lived.

Perhaps.
 


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 10, 2015
A fabulous way of describing the ebb and flow of lives, some adventurous, and some not. Most, perhaps afraid to venture out beyond the comfort of routine, thereby stuck in the rut of faith or fate depending upon their predilection. And for those that do venture out some will achieve enlightenment, and others, failure. Such is the roll of the dice of life.

Ron

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on June 9, 2015
"Possibly history’s echo will keep alive
reasoning’s patient whispering,
hopefully moving fate’s gray clouds aside,
allowing destiny’s light to break through,
to be absorbed,
embraced,
and lived"

If only . . .


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