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· A Gentle Man

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· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Sediment Within the Soul

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Time Traveling

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Might the essence of time be to remind us of a forever closing door, rather than one that shuts? (Image by Vimark)

Friday, August 14, 2015


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Time Traveling
by Odin Roark

When time travels,
Does the clock wonder
As it watches us watch it moving?

Does it see us gaze at numbers
Like forgotten memories in orbit,
A chronicle of yesterday’s journeys?

As time travels,
Our glances recall impetuous youth,
A gathering disdain for aging,
And hopeful resolve when we are old.

When time is traveling,
Why do we watch precise starts and stops,
Question ourselves of distance and time,
Preoccupy our minds with an end game?

Perhaps it’s because…

Clocks are made to travel,
Counting down the intervals we create,
The personal vacuums of measured life,
And ever increasing awareness of death.

All the while…

Existence remains infinite,
Readily aware
When one to twelve travels,
It is but by man’s limiting invention.


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 15, 2015
I'm left wondering if time wanders or wonders…?

Time for us is very Earth centered. The Sun, one of the first gods to be worshiped, was the center of civilizations like the Mayans and Egyptians. Very few cultures don't keep track of the seasons or the years. The predictability of the sun coming up tomorrow, makes it possible for us to create time as some kind of constant in a changing world.

As your poem clearly points out, time runs out for all of us. As for where it's running out to? I don't know. The sun only has about 4 billion years left.

Ron

Reviewed on August 15, 2015
Time was only created by humans on earth. Before time, we were just travelers in the universe. Our souls live an eternal life even before time began. There was no beginning, and no end. They weren't created by humans then. When our souls come to earth, then we learn about the time, the beginning, and we still don't know the end, because it is just not an existence. Our souls will continue to travel in the universe when our bodies expire. No time of the end in sight yet, It's only a term created by humans on earth, and that is not being used in space.

Sandie

Reviewed by ChrisTopher Stone
Reviewed on August 14, 2015
I would rather be a time traveler than a clock watcher. Thinking about old age (currently on that doorstep), is like tying your shoelaces from both shoes together and trying to run. I'd rather run without shoes. I seldom think about dying because I'm too busy living. Hope that never changes...

This is a great poem.
Thanks,

Chris

Reviewed by Eva Pasco
Reviewed on August 14, 2015
A beautiful poem wrapped around truths as to the infinity of existence; man's limiting invention; keeping a vigilant watch on the approach of death.


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