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Crazy Shit, This Rain

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With the water intensive weather hogging the information of the world, I’m reminded of a friend (way back) whose rain-like experiences hopefully endured, even though he might have had many experiences yet to come. (Image by pinterst)

Monday, September 11, 2017


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Crazy Shit, This Rain

He once said he’d heard it said,
Old age in Mississippi,
Like middle of the night rain,
Lonely and cold,
Worthy only of prison yards
And soup lines.

That rain visits my granny and dog all the time.
Makes slow the calloused feet to move now,
Shufflin' across wooden planks,
Skinny dog by her side,
Shufflin' too,
Draggin' what energy's left,
Just to remind each other
Life ain't over ‘till it's over.

Trembling limbs hold fast.
The trek from bed to toilet to bed,
Middle of the night rain,
Keeps tappin’ at the door.

Crazy shit that rain.
Only saw it once
Hitchin' coast to coast,
Back in the day...
Overnight visit with granny it was.
Could of stayed longer,
But the rain...

I'm thinkin' all that now,
Peerin' from my penthouse window.
Central Park dimming.
Summer night with the Bard.
Rained out.
Eloquence I don't know,
So I listen from afar

Rain, near or far,
All the same
When waiting to make the sale.
1 kilo.
Another month's rent.
He’s there.
I’m here.

NY.
Mississippi.
Empty room's an empty room.
Dark room's a dark room.

Old rain.
Young rain.
Tappin'seems the same.
The door.
My conscience.
It’s all just a blur of a window’s protection in our downpours.

Crazy shit, this rain.


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 12, 2017
Either too much, or too little… The rain is an unpredictable bitch. You didn't mention the tin roof like Tennessee Williams. A most memorable sound when I heard it. Nor the lightning flashes and close in thunderous blasts of strikes that would lift you off your bed in shock and make my dog cower under the bed. Nor the trees going down all around you. With that crashing sound. The rain, she be necessary… But she be a bitch, sometimes.

I thought before Harvey that we would flood if ever we got 30 inches. The final total over four days was 32 inches and we didn't flood. Now I am a believer that we can get 50 inches and still not flood, but folks downstream will get it in spades. ;-)

Love a rainy poem like this.

Ron

Reviewed on September 12, 2017
Rain, thunder, and lightening energize me! (Not the amount given by "Irma"...) I love the line, "Dark room's a dark room.". 'Lots of meaning in it.

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on September 11, 2017
I guess it's all a matter of perspective. Living here in the desert, I welcome the rain, such that we get here. I just spent three weeks in South India during the monsoon and there were torrential rains two out of three days (and nights). I couldn't get enough rain. On the one of three days of non-rain, I just sat on the balcony looking for more. Crazy shit, this rain!


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