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Obsrurity's Bliss

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

One might argue one’s choice of writing discipline reflects one’s entrapment or lack of.

Monday, May 27, 2019


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Obscurity's Bliss

Poetry readers
Listeners
And the curious

Might it be
Poets escape demands
They Do
Rather than
Be?

Is it not possible
Dignity's survival depends
On being detached
From that which
Wishes
To attach?

Could such inner freedom
Liquefy shackles
Of riches
Of fame
Of expectation?

And...

Is it possible
Rewards reside
In dances with words
While others labor language
To serve
To validate
To inure
Their attachment
To other others?

Perhaps...

Spirits generous
Remain
Uncontainable
Like water running
Around
And over
Stones
And other
Obstacles impotent
To imprisonment

For some...

Aloneness
Protects true peace
The calm voice
Whispering a language of fire
From a forever candle
A flame impervious of storm
Its seclusion secured

Yet

Humble we must be
For we are but stand-ins
For sunrises in the dark
We poets
We purveyors of
Obscurity's bliss

 

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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 28, 2019
You write of poetry with metaphors describing escape and being alone as a way of providing "liquid freedom." There is a certain amount of obscurity in writing poetry and you have encapsulated vignettes of the activity itself in poetry.

Ron

Regular review? I have no idea whether I'm writing a regular review are not. Probably more irregular than regular. ;-)

Reviewed on May 28, 2019
Oh, the imagery! The metaphors that I caught anyway and the "out of the box" thinking is so vibrant that this write really got me thinking as you usually do, Odin!

Love ya!

Jane



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