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Threads So Thin

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When a virus places us in a state of self-examination and death is such a prevailing reality for most everyone, there’s that ever-present question of self-worth. “History is nothing more than the thin thread of what is remembered, stretched out over the ocean of what has been forgotten.” – Annabel Smith. (Image by Eugene Chekhov)

Wednesday, April 15, 2020


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Threads So Thin

 

Might history be but thin threads

Stretched across the seas of what has been forgotten?

 

And what do we remember

 

Recently remembered are

Yesterday’s walk with the dog

Last night’s microwave dinner

Middle of the night bathroom break

Early morning dragon breath

Shaving nicks

Burnt toast

Cold coffee

Traffic ugliness

High rise crowded elevator

Boss demands

Skipped lunch break

Slow moving clock

After work cocktail

More jammed highways

Porch light out

Fumbling of keys

Empty house

Too quiet to relax

Another cocktail

Another microwave dinner

Another night of dreams

A sea of so many forgotten times

 

Quandary…

 

Who determines ones worthy of remembrance?

 

 



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on April 16, 2020
Your poem seems to describe the daily cycle of so many caught up in the wage slave syndrome where they never get ahead and never contributed anything to history. Only doing things that are easily forgotten except in nostalgic sitcoms of everyday life deemed funny when looked at closely.

But your comment and quote about history might not be so true. Wikipedia, with the possibility of everyone on the planet with an Internet connection contributing, can much more accurately remember even if an individual destroyed all records of his/her past in the process of living a dogged life that somehow became important enough to be reported by this wonderful research format that surpasses both dictionaries, history books, and paper bound encyclopedias.

Ron

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on April 16, 2020
Yes, self- reflecting and examination of who am I? Where did I come from? What my purpose in live? Exactly...

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on April 16, 2020
Your poem so apt in today's moody, depressing ambiance with all the negative news (social distancing thru 2022?) I especially like the invocation of "slow moving clock" (indeed), and "empty house" (how about empty room but me). Our trials and the times can sometimes bring out the best in us. Thanks for posting.


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