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Train Tranquility

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

There are nocturnal dreams that often usher in a harsh reality with a gentle reminder, perhaps a foreshadowing. (Image by Greg Booher)

Sunday, November 22, 2020


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Train Tranquility

 

Various couples stroll off into the night.

 

As if in a tempest,

Trees undulate and swell where the duos vanished,

Branches make not the slightest sound,

As if mimicking the train

Idly without movement on the maze of tracks.

 

Such is the moment for a man awakening

In a long train out of service

Isolated in a fog-filled railroad yard.

 

Yet…

 

The dining car’s tables of starched white cloth,

Adorned with wine glasses, fresh flowers

Save for the waiter’s white-glove hanging off the edge,

Become an anomaly to contemplate.

 

Silence continues in its accompaniment

Of the opaque darkness of space,

Even as the empty coach far in the rear.

Reveals the man of shadowy outline

Raising his pale hand as if to wave,

But to whom is the mystery,

As the watch of yellowed crystal on his wrist

Seems to have stopped years in the past.

 



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Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on November 26, 2020
I look at the same picture and see only a fog-filled railroad yard. You see people who left earlier, trees too indistinct to know if they exist, plus the story of another era complete with wine glasses and fresh flowers. Then there is the mystery a man with a watch stopped to capture all the sights and silences for those of us with too little imagination to cling to and to find portals into the mind of the poet. Such a gift.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on November 23, 2020
then that would be tranquility


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